Abduction

[maggie2002]

This is available to anyone who wants to write it. I have a problem getting really extreme and this could and probably would lead to extreme action.

A young blindfolded woman is dragged into an abandoned warehouse in the poorest part of a large city. Obviously it has been well planned for the three men know each other and work together like a well oiled team.

Unknown to them a homeless man secreted in the upper level watches them cut off her clothes, hang her from chains they secure to the ceiling and begin to have their way with her.

He knows he should get her help but finds himself masturbating instead as he watches.

I can see several ways for this to go and while I can certainly imagine them I can't write them being hung up on safe sane and consensual. So go for it and have fun

 

[MightyZor]

How can it possibly arouse you?

 

[fiery_jack]

A young blindfolded woman is dragged into an abandoned warehouse in the poorest part of a large city. Obviously it has been well planned for the three men know each other and work together like a well oiled team.

Unknown to them a homeless man secreted in the upper level watches them cut off her clothes, hang her from chains they secure to the ceiling and begin to have their way with her.

He knows he should get her help but finds himself masturbating instead as he watches.

There's a darker tone to this idea that i find interesting, though i wonder why you feel it has to lean toward the extreme.

Do you think that if it doesn't it would be a let down in some way for you?

 

[Chicklet]

How can it possibly arouse you?

we are not here to critisize other people's fetishes. exclude the homeless man, and I think it'd be a fine and very erotic story.

Good point about the let downs, though; what things do you really, really, REALLY want to see happen?

Chicklet

 

[maggie2002]

Thanks for the input. Not my fetish and I see the homeless man as embarrased at the least at his arousal maybe regressing to a time when women mistreated him and visioning her as a substitute for all those bad times. I hadn't thought about it but of course it could go the other way Maybe this is a scene maybe she is consenting Maybe this is her Master making a fantasy of hers come true. Good thought!!!

Evil exists however and women are snatched everyday and even if it is something we wouldn't do anymore than bit a persons neck and drink their blood, the reading or watching of it sends shivers down many spines as the unnatural and unallowed always has done through time.

Think classic horror stories Pit and Pendulum, Hounds of Baskerville The Vampire Chronicles THink of drinking your victums blood and seeing their life march before your eyes EEH! makes me shiver and the thought of sexually servicing the undead who if it is to be believed are icy cold NOT!!!!

 

[Chicklet]

I see the homeless man as embarrased at the least at his arousal maybe regressing to a time when women mistreated him and visioning her as a substitute for all those bad times.

that could be a whole different story right there.

 

[Guest]

How can it possibly arouse you?

And how can sex with your flesh n blood possibly arouse you?

The answer is simple.

Everyone out there has their own likes and dislikes. Some are similar and some are different.

To each their own at this adult site.

 

[Chicklet]

Everyone out there has their own likes and dislikes.

are you saying we're all individuals or something?!

 

[Guest]

Perish the thought! What was I thinking?!?

 

[Chicklet]

Perish the thought! What was I thinking?!?

obviously, you werent

now, back to the homeless man.

 

[Guest]

now, back to the homeless man.

I can see the humiliation aspect, but only if the characters in the story realize he is there. In general, I see it as a "turn off" for the reader otherwise.

 

[fiery_jack]

Thanks for the input. Not my fetish and I see the homeless man as embarrased at the least at his arousal maybe regressing to a time when women mistreated him and visioning her as a substitute for all those bad times. I hadn't thought about it but of course it could go the other way Maybe this is a scene maybe she is consenting Maybe this is her Master making a fantasy of hers come true. Good thought!!!

So the darker elements would be the thoughts of the homeless man, while the woman is living out a fantasy as her master watches?

If the homeless guy's desires are diluting the scene below, in a good way, would the real conclusion satisfy him?

Or did i just take a wrong turn somewhere?

 

[Chicklet]

I just don't think this particular story works with this homeless guy.

there are basically two plots here

1) about the man and woman playing around or else actually having a nonconsent scene in the building

2) a voyeur story about a homeless man that resents women.

chicklet