H Hullo_nurse Literotica Guru Joined Oct 4, 1999 Posts 572 Apr 25, 2000 #1 Short & sweet, this is a great story with a great spin at the end. Keep up the great work!!
Carl East I finally found the ONE! Joined Apr 22, 2000 Posts 3,219 May 8, 2000 #2 Thanks HN, I enjoy trying to take the reader in one direction, then taking them by surprise at the end, I think I succeeded in this story, even if it was short.
Thanks HN, I enjoy trying to take the reader in one direction, then taking them by surprise at the end, I think I succeeded in this story, even if it was short.
