Aaralon’s Discoveries - Sex Magic

[Sixth]

Salutations,

This thread has been set up as a project point for the Chyoo Interactive story “Aaralon’s Discoveries”. It’s a story set in the magical Light Shadow College where arcane and mysterious talents are a life long lesson and recently where inscubi, succubi and other naughty demons have began to appear.

The idea is that this thread will be used to announce new pages, share suggestions for plot twists, characters or interesting tit bits. Users can subscribe to this thread for email alerts in away that isn’t yet possible for the interactive stories and so the hope is the use of the forums (as suggested by the forum description) will encourage people to write (and write again) for the story.

It begins at: http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/543

[edit] The URL above is updated for Chyoo2. Other URLs in this thread might not have been. Check the posting date.

 

[Guest]

good idea Sixth, and an excellent start to your story. You write very well. I'll have to see if i can come up with something that will work with it.

 

[ScarlettRose]

um, aka unregistered (see above) what can i say, its 3 am here.

 

[Sixth]

First additions

The story now has it's first page from a non-Sixth author. android1966 has added to the thread in which Aaralon is off to steal the necklace from Mistress Janna.

This has been the first page I've approved and its lead to a discover. Once I approve a page, I can't edit it again. Why might I want to edit it again? Well, you can see that Android and myself have different settings on our computers and his text has come in on a narrower width than mine and it looks odd. I shall be making this suggestion on the neighbouring forum thread.

 

[LauraSG]

Yes, I have noticed that Android1966's work is narrower like that.

 

[android1966]

Hiya people
Nice to see a new(ish) group of authors here on chyoo. I've been posting here for about four months now. This has been a big learning curve for me, I hadn't written zip since dropping out of school. Learning punctuation and use of paragraphs has been a strain on my underused little grey cells. The fact that I don't really understand how my PC works hasn't helped much. Still I like to think that I'm improving, albeit slowly. A big thanks at this point to Bison, who gave me much needed constructive criticism early on. Look forward to posting to your stories in the future. I really dig the sci-fi and fantasy genre.

android1966

 

[Sixth]

A little more

Aaralon's up to two additional authors now. Thanks very much. This link will take you straight to the page before both of the submissions. The newest, michaelmt1's offering, has the struggling hero try the door to Mistress Janna's quarters.

I'm pleased with this addition because I was wondering what on earth I could have for the second option at that point in the story and Michealmt1 has thought of something I wasn't expecting. I do want there to be at least 2 options as to what might happen next whereever there's 1 option. As we all know; width is as important as length even if Chyoo chooses to promote the latter. I realise that this is a hopelessly ambitious task but I'll try.

 

[michaelmt1]

I suddenly realised just how difficult it is to write a thread that can have two clear options.

The old question of what If he..... well i will have to write each thread not only with a prefered option but setting up at the very least an option as to how the character will go ahead.

Interesting stuff.

Thanks for the kind words about my first published works im still working on getting a new story up tho.

Mike

 

[Sixth]

We've added more of michaelmt1's work to the thread above.

It is bloody tricky writing with a cliffhanger at the end of each page. One tack is to keep writing until you reach one, there's no upper limit on how much text you can submit - but I wouldn't offer up too much reading in one go; I don't think that best suits Chyoo readers.

 

[Sixth]

New thread, new author.

I've been really busy with exams but it seems that sometimes luck comes along anyway. From out of the blue we've had a submission to Aaralon's Discoveries. A submission from a new author.

Millenia was right on the ball when (s)he added the other set-up option for the flying spy to take. To read Millenia's entry you'd best start at the start since it's not far in, have Aaralon insist on setting out some ground rules first and read on to the pussy eating.

 

[Sixth]

I've added a few more pages to the story. We also broke 1000 reads this week.

To follow on from the direction michaelmt1 took in the threads that see Aaralon succumb to the demands of the first demon, get caught trying to steal the necklace and then punished by the mages (the punishment which includes a huge cock) I've added a single page as an option to this one.

Much more work and (hopefully) a nice new twist has been added to a previous branch. To date the least popular page had been when Aaralon manages to banish the first demon. I guess there wasn't enough sex and there wasn't a clear direction as to what might happen next. This, I think, should fix that. The options continue from this one.

The changes also mean the longest thread is 7 pages long.

 

[jean247]

I really enjoyed this story. Very creative. I'm afraid I would mess it up though if I tried to add anything to it.

 

[Sixth]

I really enjoyed this story. Very creative. I'm afraid I would mess it up though if I tried to add anything to it.

I'm glad you liked it. Feel free to read and rate the story though - both help earn more reads (well, providing your ratings are fair and high).

 

[SlidingInSilk]

I really enjoyed this story. Very creative. I'm afraid I would mess it up though if I tried to add anything to it.

Awww... your post on my story was really good. Maybe it's the fantasy realm you have trouble with? Maybe you could submit and Sixth would be nice enough to help you out if you wanted...
(looks at Sixth and winks) I know that getting writers to add to the stories can be hard. What do you think Sixth?

 

[Sixth]

It is hard to get authors. I'm busy with exams. Whereas I'd normally do what I could to help mold anyone who expressed uncertainity into an author best suited for adding to Aaralon's story it wasn't something I wanted to get the pompoms out for at the minute.

Solution: Submit a few practise attempts to Silk's fantasy stories and then when you're putting Shakespeare to shame come back and submit to Aaralon's.









(Warning: Weird humour contained in this post)

 

[Sixth]

That's right! More pointless updating. Spot the new threads and notice the changes to the guidelines and the blurb... in an attempt to lure in more authors I've decided to broaden the scope of the story.

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=543

Enjoy.

 

[Sixth]

Huzzah

I'm super pleased to have a brand new author and page addition to Aalaron's Discoveries.

This link takes you to the page just before, so you know what's going on.

 

[thehoneysmith]

Now that you have approved my first thread I thought I would come and tell you what a great story you created. Aaralon can get himself into all kinds of hot water...

 

[Sixth]

Now that you have approved my first thread I thought I would come and tell you what a great story you created. Aaralon can get himself into all kinds of hot water...

I've approved your second page too; another great one.

Yes, one of the aims of the story was that it's scope was broad enough to cover all sorts of kinks and twists. That's something the Fantasy/Sci-Fi section is uniquely suited too.

 

[thehoneysmith]

Yes, and I may have to write a couple more pages for you, but not until after I've had a little nap with my favored toy.

 

[Sixth]

Nice one. The ever popular Silk has added a post to the new thread.

I think we must be pushing the 7 page current high score on that one. New additions should take Aaralon's deepest thread to 8 - which I'm sure will attract more reads. On the other hand, I'll also be wildly pleased if authors add different options/threads to the flow. As we all know; width as well as length!

 

[SlidingInSilk]

Nice one. The ever popular Silk has added a post to the new thread.

Sorry it took so long Sixth, just hadn't found an idea to spin from. If I haven't said it before. I like the idea as a whole.

 

[Sixth]

Not to worry, just because I'm keen to have lots of authors doesn't mean there's any real pressure to write!

I think that as a wider range of people add to the stories then the ideas broaden and so a wider range of people will be inspired to write and with a bit of luck it'll be a nice circle of improvements.

 

[Sixth]

The Discoveries continue! We have a new author too.

Keep control of the first demon. Read through "Cheater, Cheater, Pussy Eater" and you'll find the new work there.

Enjoy.
Submit. (Although I'm away for the weekend so it may take a day or so for me to accept your submission)

 

[Sixth]

Good news

The story's writers have increased in number to 8.

Silk has been writing some high quality stuff and I kept on holding off making note of that here since I kept on telling myself I'd write some more too.

FetishBoy has added two more new pages and currently wears the crown of newest writer.

Their new submissions are dotted around the place. I'll leave you to flick through the pages and spot the new pages.

The longest thread is still 7 pages but we're pushing that limit on a number of threads now.