Aaaagh!

[geronimo_appleby]

I received the following PC on a recent submission to Toys and masturbation:

"Quite well written, and despite Astrid's dominating behavior, very erotic as well. The sticking point for me was bringing up Marion's marriage. That took the story from an erotic one to another cheating wife story. Being seduced into the relationship with Astrid and her girls simply means she's now vunerable to blackmail or a dom/sub relationship which will eventually undermine her marriage."

I appreciate the comments and can accept them. But is this a sign of an overspill from 'Loving Wives'?

It's a conspiracy!!!

 

[neonlyte]

I received the following PC on a recent submission to Toys and masturbation:

"Quite well written, and despite Astrid's dominating behavior, very erotic as well. The sticking point for me was bringing up Marion's marriage. That took the story from an erotic one to another cheating wife story. Being seduced into the relationship with Astrid and her girls simply means she's now vunerable to blackmail or a dom/sub relationship which will eventually undermine her marriage."

I appreciate the comments and can accept them. But is this a sign of an overspill from 'Loving Wives'?

It's a conspiracy!!!

The Bastards have got you marked... quick find something to hide behind

 

[geronimo_appleby]

The Bastards have got you marked... quick find something to hide behind

Like an alt? LOL

 

[elsol]

I love those little...

"Actually, while this story was quite good... I wish you had written this OTHER story."

Sincerely,
ElSol

 

[English Lady]

geronimo....they just love you babe

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Actually... Who says that Marion's marriage will be undermined? Is she not mine to play with as my whim takes me?
Hmmmm. I wonder. Should I turn her husband into a creampie eating, wimp cuckold? Probably best not to, LOL.
Perhaps her husband could receive a little invite along to the coffee mornings and have five ladies use him as their sex toy...

 

[Stella_Omega]

Actually... Who says that Marion's marriage will be undermined? Is she not mine to play with as my whim takes me?
Hmmmm. I wonder. Should I turn her husband into a creampie eating, wimp cuckold? Probably best not to, LOL.
Perhaps her husband could receive a little invite along to the coffee mornings and have five ladies use him as their sex toy...

Oooh... That'll piss off the trolls no end!

 

[geronimo_appleby]

and the score plummets! ouch.

 

[OhMissScarlett]

Grrr! I hate those backhanded comments. "I really loved this story, except for blah blah blah...". I wrote an anal story and got lots of "This story would be great if it wasn't for the anal..." comments. I mean, WTF?

Well, at least they didn't just pronounce it crap because they didn't like it. It does seem like the person actually read the story. If it had been written in all caps, I'd think the LW readers were stalking you.