A_J does it again!

I don't know whether he did it again, but that was a very very decent story; scifi and sex, what more do you want?

Although I'd have to take him to task about needing other power sources when he has a-g. Must be enough cosmic debris between here and there to repel him all the way.

Still, v.good

Gauche
 
Huh?

Don't think so at all.

Maybe if the grammar and spelling were not that bad I might have been able to finish it.

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ugh!

Couldn't finish the first one... too full of cliches and stereotypes... definitely of the bachelor party, belly scratching genre

More of the same here.
 
well i think it was pretty damn good, it read well (to me anyway) was a bit different and in places a great giggle! I mean it didn't have me panting and wanting more, but it was a good read all the same!
 
Pretty funny stuff. I'm not sure about the first one being A_J though. Maybe.

You're not saying the second one is A_J, too, are you?

They both made me chuckle though the second one's grammatical style was a little tougher. I see too many semi-colons in a row and I get a bit distracted.

Maybe it's because I use too many emoticons.:eek:

;)
 
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