lady_cat13
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- Oct 20, 2005
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Hello there everyone-
I can hardly believe I'm on this site at all, and the blushing hasn't died down at all yet, but I'm getting better. Anyway, I wrote my first attempt at an erotic story back in October, on a bet actually. In addition to totally shocking a friend of mine who apparently thought I was completely innocent and naive, have found that I really like this kind of writing- up to a point. This is where I'm wondering if I need help.
I have a problem writing... ah, certain explicit words. I don't curse or use such language myself, so if I try to include it in my writing, it doesn't seem to work at all and sounds ridiculous. None of my current stories have much, if any, truly dodgy language, and everyone who's written has told me they've enjoyed them. But I am wondering whether the way I've been writing is... well, what people want? Do people want to hear the coarse language, the specifics? Or is it ok to leave the explicit description to the imagination?
The people who have provided feedback have been so wonderfully supportive with their positive comments about my novice attempts at erotica. The only thing is, their nice thoughts won't help me improve my writing much. If anyone has the time or inclination, I'd really appreciate some constructive criticism, and some opinions as to whether or not I should try to get a bit more 'down and dirty' with language.
Anyway, my stories are pretty short, and can be found here:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=585679&page=submissions
Thanks in advance for any help you may be!
lady_cat13
I can hardly believe I'm on this site at all, and the blushing hasn't died down at all yet, but I'm getting better. Anyway, I wrote my first attempt at an erotic story back in October, on a bet actually. In addition to totally shocking a friend of mine who apparently thought I was completely innocent and naive, have found that I really like this kind of writing- up to a point. This is where I'm wondering if I need help.
I have a problem writing... ah, certain explicit words. I don't curse or use such language myself, so if I try to include it in my writing, it doesn't seem to work at all and sounds ridiculous. None of my current stories have much, if any, truly dodgy language, and everyone who's written has told me they've enjoyed them. But I am wondering whether the way I've been writing is... well, what people want? Do people want to hear the coarse language, the specifics? Or is it ok to leave the explicit description to the imagination?
The people who have provided feedback have been so wonderfully supportive with their positive comments about my novice attempts at erotica. The only thing is, their nice thoughts won't help me improve my writing much. If anyone has the time or inclination, I'd really appreciate some constructive criticism, and some opinions as to whether or not I should try to get a bit more 'down and dirty' with language.
Anyway, my stories are pretty short, and can be found here:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=585679&page=submissions
Thanks in advance for any help you may be!
lady_cat13