A Very shy Hello

[sxcascinn]

Sigh I am being a big scaredy cat..
But decided it was time to come and say hello..
I have posted a poem... the link is in my sig...
I was wondering if maybe some of you could have a look please.
Let me know what you think.
I write stories to, but am kind of working my way up to posting them
I post a lot in the Ah but for some reason I have been too chicken to put my hand up here..
So anyway Here I am now saying Hiiii
Oh and can you tell I am very nervous sigh...
Hugs everyone and ty

 

[unpredictablebijou]

Hello and welcome!

We're really not that scary, honest. Most of us are fat and old. So no need for nervousness.

Consider posting, either formally or in the threads in here, a few of your pieces. Feedback is always easier once folks have gotten a feel for your style.

blessings,
bijou

 

[Liar]

A very un-shy

HELLO!

back.



I'll read your poem later today. I'm late for the bus. Toodles!

 

[WickedEve]

I have posted a poem... the link is in my sig...
I was wondering if maybe some of you could have a look please.
Let me know what you think.

Hi

First, tell me what you like about Safety In Your Embrace.

I'll be leaving soon, but I'll read it again when I get home and maybe offer some suggestions.

 

[Angeline]

Hello and welcome! Nice to have you here.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Hello and welcome from me too I am Annie nutty as a fruit cake but I swear I was sane before I came in here .....

Ermmmmm why doesnt my new avatar move? It's supposed to go mewwwwww .... can't have a pussy that doesn't move .....

 

[Unbridled_Passion]

Don't be shy! We are all a little crazy here. I liked your first poem, very hot! My suggestions are this... When I first started here, I was nervous as a nine tailed cat in a room of rocking chairs, but feedback made me a better poet, as least I think. (lol) The use of I, we , and us can be a bit overused because we are new at this, but eventually with practice, you may find other words to express your feelings i the same manner. Good luck with your writing, and I hope to see more of your work.

 

[sxcascinn]

Hi thanks for the welcome...
Sorry been hiding out, my uncle was here for the weekend lol...