A twisted cinderella

[mccock]

Hi,
I was wondering what would you think about such a storyline, before I try writing it.

A mean step mother is throwing a small party for her close friends while her husband is away.
She persuades her step son into cooking and cleaning the house. When he's finally done, she tells him that their maid is on her day-off today, and so- he's forced to dress up as a maid (the mean step mother will give him shoes, pantyhose, and will get him all girlied-up by makeup and nailpolish..)
and serve the food and drinks.

(she might 'blackmail' him by mentioning his F in math she found out in his drawer)
Of course that the serving won't stop there, as he'll realize that her male friends want more than just wine...

Would love to hear your thoughts

 

[daddyslittlebitch]

Hi,
I was wondering what would you think about such a storyline, before I try writing it.

A mean step mother is throwing a small party for her close friends while her husband is away.
She persuades her step son into cooking and cleaning the house. When he's finally done, she tells him that their maid is on her day-off today, and so- he's forced to dress up as a maid (the mean step mother will give him shoes, pantyhose, and will get him all girlied-up by makeup and nailpolish..)
and serve the food and drinks.

(she might 'blackmail' him by mentioning his F in math she found out in his drawer)
Of course that the serving won't stop there, as he'll realize that her male friends want more than just wine...

Would love to hear your thoughts

Mmm, I like this idea. How about adding in some wicked stepsisters, not "ugly" as such, but furious to see that Cinders makes a prettier girl when dolled up than they do. Maybe they have to take out their anger on his/her ass.

Also, you could do something with the glass slipper idea in the regular story. If somebody from the party wanted to track down the slut that gave him such an amazing time, it would be tricky when he's back to his boy form, but the shoe he has could only fit a man's feet...

Perhaps then he has to choose between staying a guy, abused by his step-mom/step-sisters, or become a bitch for good to a "prince" who may or may not be all that charming.

 

[Black_Dahlia]

I'd read this. Even though it's not my usual thing, I think you're onto a winner.

I would include the guy's ugly step-brothers, who are fat and ugly and disgusting. They could be twins and work for an insurance company or something. Being fat and ugly, the terrible twosome don't have dates for the company Christmas party and whine to their mother, whio comes up with the idea of using their pathetic put-upon step-brother as their date. They dress him as a pretty girl and he/she ends up used and passed around amongst the staff.

 

[mccock]

I like both of your ideas! I think I'll combine them
Perhaps one of the man steals his high heel sandal, only to track him later and use him once again as his "princess".

The two loser step brothers idea is so sick that it suits the scene like a glassed-shoe
I'll try to combine it too.

PS- this is not my type of thing usually too, but this scene..it's just...good!
PS2- I'd like to roleplay this one before I sit to write it down / write it down together with a partner.
Would anyone be interested to join me?

 

[ChristopherDB]

Sounds like a promising idea. For the sake of keeping it a legal story I assume the son is 18, maybe got that F in a college course, or could even just be a loser living at home.

Now I've got a twist for you... Suppose the son is all dolled up to service the guests but at some point he gets a chance to leave or sneak out to a party he finds out about which is up the street. He shows up and hits it off with someone there but then has to hurry back home. You could leave the plot sort of hanging and easily set yourself up for a sequel.

Christopher