A Timeless Place Ch. 2/Sequel to Bigrig

[windstormy]

Here's the link. I hope you enjoy it. Would love to hear any comments on it. It is gay male material, so if you're not into that, please bypass this one.

The comments have been turned back on. So, please feel free to give me a vote and comment before you leave the chapter, please? I'm begging, yes...LOL...

Thank you.

 

[athena_by_night]

Nicely done....the storyline, the characters, the energy and emotion... loved the dancing as you know..... sighs....wonders if you can write an entire story based on one continuous dance.....hmmm.....

excellent per your usual, Billy....... good stuff!

 

[windstormy]

Nicely done....the storyline, the characters, the energy and emotion... loved the dancing as you know..... sighs....wonders if you can write an entire story based on one continuous dance.....hmmm.....

excellent per your usual, Billy....... good stuff!

I thank you, my lovely goddess....

And I don't know that I would attempt to write an entire story based on one continuous dance. As much as I love to dance, that might become a little difficult for me to write. I could try though. Lol......

 

[athena_by_night]

I thank you, my lovely goddess....

And I don't know that I would attempt to write an entire story based on one continuous dance. As much as I love to dance, that might become a little difficult for me to write. I could try though. Lol......

But its a nice thought though huh? LOL at least in my mind! Thanks for all the posts and updates my friend..I have missed them and definitely appreciated them! I went to watch a movie and well..... 4 hours later after an um 'power nap', yes that's it.... I found this.... you take care...

Marie

 

[dcraig]

Here's the link. I hope you enjoy it. Would love to hear any comments on it. It is gay male material, so if you're not into that, please bypass this one. Thank you.

I truly enjoyed this chapter, Billy. It is full of eroticism. And the question about Jonathan grieving his dearly departed Uncle is now indisputable. We will now see if he will move through the phases of grief in a healthy manner. But I sense you intend to make this a very riveting tale for us. I can't wait.

 

[dcraig]

I thank you, my lovely goddess....

And I don't know that I would attempt to write an entire story based on one continuous dance. As much as I love to dance, that might become a little difficult for me to write. I could try though. Lol......

To do so, you would have to follow the format of something along the lines of The Nutcracker, or Swan Lake. It could be done, but most tediously so, I'm sure.

 

[dcraig]

But its a nice thought though huh? LOL at least in my mind! Thanks for all the posts and updates my friend..I have missed them and definitely appreciated them! I went to watch a movie and well..... 4 hours later after an um 'power nap', yes that's it.... I found this.... you take care...

Marie

I agree, Marie. It would be a very nice thought that could very well be constructed into a story. And I believe that with the combined effort between the two of you, it could be done very well.

 

[athena_by_night]

I agree, Marie. It would be a very nice thought that could very well be constructed into a story. And I believe that with the combined effort between the two of you, it could be done very well.

Thank you for the vote of confidence, love. Very much appreciated. Just think.....between the vamps, tramps and scamps....we have a whole host of characters to choose from! lol... well, there aren't any tramps in the stories, but it did rhyme..... you take care.....

Marie

 

[dcraig]

Thank you for the vote of confidence, love. Very much appreciated. Just think.....between the vamps, tramps and scamps....we have a whole host of characters to choose from! lol... well, there aren't any tramps in the stories, but it did rhyme..... you take care.....

Marie

So very true, my dear. Thank you for your kind words. I have absorbed them like a sponge....... ​

 

[athena_by_night]

So very true, my dear. Thank you for your kind words. I have absorbed them like a sponge....... ​

you make me smile...

 

[DGentleBen]

Here's the link. I hope you enjoy it. Would love to hear any comments on it. It is gay male material, so if you're not into that, please bypass this one. Thank you.

Billy, I really love your stories, especially when someone reads them as well as they are read in our little library circle thingy. I kinda miss that, too. Hope we can resume that pretty soon.

But, I really enjoyed the intimacy going on between Bruce and Jonathan in this chapter. It was very......exciting for me. And I liked the way you portrayed the scenes between Jonathan's musings over his Uncle and what Bruce was doing at the same time. And you pull it all together with so much finess. That is really good.

Marie did that too in chapter 6, I think. Where stephanos was remembering Luka's castle and some of the good times he had with his former friend. That was really good too. I kinda like stuff like that, I'm discovering.

 

[windstormy]

Billy, I really love your stories, especially when someone reads them as well as they are read in our little library circle thingy. I kinda miss that, too. Hope we can resume that pretty soon.

But, I really enjoyed the intimacy going on between Bruce and Jonathan in this chapter. It was very......exciting for me. And I liked the way you portrayed the scenes between Jonathan's musings over his Uncle and what Bruce was doing at the same time. And you pull it all together with so much finess. That is really good.

Marie did that too in chapter 6, I think. Where stephanos was remembering Luka's castle and some of the good times he had with his former friend. That was really good too. I kinda like stuff like that, I'm discovering.

Well, thank you, Ben. And I hope we can get our library circle going again soon, too...​

 

[windstormy]

Chapter 3 is out

And OMG the comments thingy was turned on!!!!!!!!! So, those of you interested can go read, vote and comment, how about that? Can you tell I'm exited? hehehe

 

[athena_by_night]

A Timeless Place Ch.2/Sequel to Bigrig

And OMG the comments thingy was turned on!!!!!!!!! So, those of you interested can go read, vote and comment, how about that? Can you tell I'm exited? hehehe

About damn time I say...hehehe....and I commented....

 

[mastergary4u2]

Wow what a warm way to get some lovin'...hehehe. Loved that way you did this chapter. I could tell Jonathan was a little distracted by the memories of his Uncle, but at the same time, he seemed to be enjoying the always patient love of Bruce. Good work, Billy...Onto the next...

 

[sweeteric2u2]

So much romance and intrigue at the same time. And poor Jonathan with all his memories of his Uncle. Grieving is no fun at all, babe. And I know Jonathan will come through it with flying colors. He's a tough kid, just like you.

 

[moffettasweet]

Mmmm...

Oooh, I like, Billy. Gotta have some more...

 

[spiritwalker]

Even Better Chapter...

Really liked this one. Intrigued and baited. Onto the next... ​

 

[Doug Lewis]

Enjoyed this chapter, Billy. I can see how Bruce is wanting to enjoy Jon. At the same time, Jon is deep in his own world with all of the memories he's having of his late Uncle. Of course, I suspect as everyone else, that you intend to bend and mold this into a very healthy suspense thriller. I can't wait, actually. LOL...

 

[windstormy]

Enjoyed this chapter, Billy. I can see how Bruce is wanting to enjoy Jon. At the same time, Jon is deep in his own world with all of the memories he's having of his late Uncle. Of course, I suspect as everyone else, that you intend to bend and mold this into a very healthy suspense thriller. I can't wait, actually. LOL...

Hmm...Now, whatever gave you THAT idea? hehehe ​