A thread idea that could be troublesome

[cutieangel]

Hey guys, Cutie here.

I've got this idea for a Goldeneye arc, but I need a little feedback.

Now those who have read the whole story know when our hero captured the dean, he also got her sexy secratary Rebecca. Now what I thought of was our hero using his powers to create at least one alternate persona, though ideally I wanted two.

Becky: Becky is an 18 nymphomanic cheer leader, who wants sex and lots of it.

Kiki: This is the one that could be a problem. Kiki is a playful eight year old who provides innocent nonerotic companionship for our hero.

So should I add Kiki or not? I think she can be added safely but would the temptation to misuse her be too great?

Then again as editor I can reject and block any sick pedaphiles who try....

Feedback please!

 

[jakelyon]

No Way!

My opinion is I would not even begin to approach having an underage character in a Chyoo story. Just too many ways for it to go in a direction that you and no one else wants.

I don't see whay the character would need to be 8 to fufill any requirements of the story.

 

[deathofcards]

I can see where you're going with the idea Cutie and the idea of a comedy sidekick is one, which would work however eight seems a little young regardless of the fact nothing sexual is intended.

As part of an established story it could work, I doubt it would be possible to get this past the mods for a new story. Really as the characetr isn't going to be in any sexual situations there really shouldn't be any issue.

 

[niceguy2002tim]

dumb idea

Cutie,
well I am not too keen on the idea, I do have an alturnative in mind. What if the character of Kiki is an adult with the mind of a child. I am not sure about the spilt personalities, as I haven't fully read your story. Perhaps even using a midgit? lol.

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)

 

[gystex]

My suggestion is, give her the persona without mentioning the age. She could be playful and innocent and act in a childish manner without you ever actually saying she has essentially regressed to that stage. And since you've already identified her as an adult, it does not violate any rules.

I guess I sort of wonder why you would want to introduce a childish persona into a porn story. I guarantee it will turn off a lot of your readers, angering some of them (I know I would not contribute to such a thread). It strikes me that a better way to handle it which might achieve the same essential effect would be to convince "Becky" that she is a virgin, utterly unaware of what sex even is. That would eliminate the child angle while keeping the innocence that I imagine you're looking for.

 

[lilguy]

doestn seem that bad. If your trying to make an actulal plot

just dont have the kid have sex thats all.

 

[bungakawa2000]

What others have said.

Ultimately, it's up to you but it's a touchy thing to do. Not forbidden in any way, but touchy.

Also, it seems like if someone report your thread for "underage sex", mods sometimes seem to just "scan" the thread for mentions of underage stuff. So...

Bunga

 

[JagFarlane]

Hmmmm having read the story, I can tell there is going to be quite a bit of sex invovled...it may be prudent to keep clear of an underaged character for the time being...btw hope you like the thread I posted.

 

[cutieangel]

You guys gave me some great feedback, most appreciated. I think I will keep Kiki as a non erotic character, except I'll make her 20 and a little ditzy, but very playful and energetic. Maybe make her an accidental personality that comes about when our hero loses his focus or some such thing.

 

[jakelyon]

You guys gave me some great feedback, most appreciated. I think I will keep Kiki as a non erotic character, except I'll make her 20 and a little ditzy, but very playful and energetic. Maybe make her an accidental personality that comes about when our hero loses his focus or some such thing.

Now that sounds interesting and I think it will work as the plot device you were looking for.