Unblemished
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- Apr 17, 2022
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So I wrote a quick little stroker just now wherein a rather dominant man shows a young lady that she can do better than her current boyfriend, and demonstrates by acting as the bull, if you will. Nothing groundbreaking, pretty basic fantasy-fetish stuff, but then there’s nothing wrong with that, is there?
Now, at the end of the story the man’s wife joins them, tells the other girl that her husband had to do all the work in the sex she just watched, and asks her: “You're not going to let a man work that hard without a thank-you, are you?"
Suffice to say, she is not.
But whilst the wife claims to have some ideas on how to do so, I’ll admit that I didn’t give it too much thought. I’m sure I can think of something, but I just thought it was a nice note to end on. So I’ll ask here, and see if anyone has any opinions: What would you have the character do in that situation, what do you think, if you read the story, would fit? What would you want to see?
If anyone has an idea that really hooks me, I’ll probably write it. With attribution, of course.
Now, at the end of the story the man’s wife joins them, tells the other girl that her husband had to do all the work in the sex she just watched, and asks her: “You're not going to let a man work that hard without a thank-you, are you?"
Suffice to say, she is not.
But whilst the wife claims to have some ideas on how to do so, I’ll admit that I didn’t give it too much thought. I’m sure I can think of something, but I just thought it was a nice note to end on. So I’ll ask here, and see if anyone has any opinions: What would you have the character do in that situation, what do you think, if you read the story, would fit? What would you want to see?
If anyone has an idea that really hooks me, I’ll probably write it. With attribution, of course.