a simple brother/ sister runaway story

[pointless]

i have an idea for a story running around in my bored little noggin using the brother/sister incest cliche. i've been seriously considering making it a little sister showes up at big brothers house in the big city because mom and dad are drunk losers type story. my only problem is i can't think of a good way to get them to fuck each other.

sex scene, no problem. general plot, i've got that. what i'm looking for is the seduction or catalyst. any ideas are welcome.

oh, and the sister is 18, brother 21. he's in college, she's a petite little bluehaired punk chick.

anyone?

 

[Peter2002]

Think traditional

She may be in need for a big brother. But that doesn't excuse bratty behaviour. Little sister is told that if she plans on staying with big brother she'll be subject to old-fashioned, barebottomed, over-the-knee spankings. After the first session, brother moves to comfort sister... the rest is in your imagination.

 

[Guest]

So, does the brother live in a dorm, a frat house, does he have his own apartment?

Since there is a 3 year age difference between the siblings, we could say that the brother always saw his sister as a "pest" growing up. He's never had incestuous thoughts in his mind. Maybe it's even been a while since he's been home? (Since you said the parents were alcoholics, etc., maybe the guy didn't want to be home...?)

So, to the brother, his sister "litterally grew overnight" as far as he's concerned. (And, in real life there are late bloomers where growing is concerned.) Hell, if he's been gone for such a long time maybe he doesn't even recognize his sister? He's thinking, "Wow, who's this hot chick at my door?!"

So, without even knowing it, he just lusted after his own sister. Once he realizes who he is, he feels a bit embarrassed but lets it go so he can try to help his sister. She tells him some sob story about the parents, etc. And, even though she's 18 perhaps she's still in high school so she could be considered a "run away", etc.

Having "lusted" for her before he realized who she was, there could already be sexual tension there. And, if he lives in a frat house or has a roommate in an apt., the sister may have to sleep in his room if she stays overnight. More sexual tension. She didn't pack anything when she ranaway so she's wearing an old tee shirt of his, etc.

Maybe he offers her a drink? Trying to play "cool big bro" and all. There's many ways your story can go and many ways to set up the seduction.

 

[pointless]

that all sounds very nice.

i was thinking he either had his own apartment or in a shitty house in town.

also, i like him as the son that got away, perhaps living off the money he got from his grandma(pa, whatever at this point), but with a job and classes. high stress, little time type of life.

keep 'em coming.

 

[pop_54]

pops angle

Up to you mate, but I’d have the brother at about 26 - 27 yrs old and the sister could grow by a yr to 19 to avoid too big an age gap, less trouble making the bro really seem like big bro that way.

Maybe the bro is on the rebound from a failed relationship, even a divorce, divorce would probably be better, seems harsher and more likely to leave said victim vulnerable to little sisters over the top sympathetic loving, she never liked that bloody woman he married anyway.

Could inject a little bit of sister ran away from home due to drunken daddy sticking his hand up her skirt all the time while drunken mummy watched and encouraged it.
Maybe even the full Monty, daddy raped her when she’d just turned 18 and kept trying again, up to you whether you want it to be this depraved of course.
This would maybe introduce a little bit of sister already sexually active and looking for someone to give her more but with love not just lust.

Now you’ve told the sad tales of their miserable lives up to now, bring on the violins and start the love story.

How to get them at it, well difficult but:

Could have little sis helping bro tidy up his house after a week or so, well men are shit at cleaning and stuff aren’t we, well sometimes.

Bro trying to hang new curtains, sis gets fed up with his antics and takes over the job, bro has to hold her to stop her falling as she stands on a chair, nice slim little waist, he tickles her, she giggles and threatens him with a bit of play.
He tickles some more, she tingles all over with the sensation, and wriggles about.
She ruffles his hair dropping the curtains, the game is more important.
More tickling, more giggles and tingles, she suddenly loses balance, he catches her, she’s light as a feather.
He lifts her bodily to the bed and dumps her down, the frolicking about continues for a few minutes on the bed, they fall silent look into each others eyes when he accidentally on purpose strokes her firm young boobs, they embrace and kiss, carry on from there maybe.

Load of clichés and crap? Well that’s the problem with trying to start close family incest at 18, it doesn’t happen in real life.

Before anyone says the scenario with the curtains and chair above wouldn’t happen, it did, but with a more remote family member, cousin, and she’d suffered the divorce, he was helping re-decorate, they were actually 36 and 48 yrs old, wink.

Pops…………..

 

[pointless]

Re: pops angle

Bro trying to hang new curtains, sis gets fed up with his antics and takes over the job, bro has to hold her to stop her falling as she stands on a chair, nice slim little waist, he tickles her, she giggles and threatens him with a bit of play.
He tickles some more, she tingles all over with the sensation, and wriggles about.
She ruffles his hair dropping the curtains, the game is more important.
More tickling, more giggles and tingles, she suddenly loses balance, he catches her, she’s light as a feather.
He lifts her bodily to the bed and dumps her down, the frolicking about continues for a few minutes on the bed, they fall silent look into each others eyes when he accidentally on purpose strokes her firm young boobs, they embrace and kiss, carry on from there maybe.

i really like this idea. kinda coincides with my tickle story idea. i might have to use this one. everything was quite helpful as well, but this is wonderful. my kind of shit.

thanks

 

[The_Fool]

Re: Re: pops angle

i really like this idea. kinda coincides with my tickle story idea. i might have to use this one. everything was quite helpful as well, but this is wonderful. my kind of shit.

thanks

Pops had a great idea for spreading the age. I'll throw a new angle at you. Parents are overbearing, Dad is a very strict disciplinarian. Son gets thrown out at 18, does the military, goes to college. Happened to a friend of mine. "Happy birthday son, get the fuck out...." Girl leaves the same repressive household and moves in with brother. Now she wears (and doesn't wear) whatever she feels like. I had a wonderful time in college tickling this a girl in a button shirt with no bra on. Untucked of course. Fits in better with the apartment/old house idea.

 

[pointless]

your right. i probably will end up stretching the ages. at this point nothing is etched in stone. i'm actually working on another story as well, but it is nothing of importance.

i do like all of the ideas about the parents. i was thinking about the possibility of making them actively cruel. i was trying passive, but it just wasn't coming out right on paper. it wasn't giving the characters enough motivation.

 

[Guest]

It looks like you have a lot of good things to use now. Hopefully the words will flow!

 

[pointless]

with any luck. my thanks.

 

[Guest]

 

[pop_54]

Hi kid

Love the new avathingie darling, very sweet.

 

[Guest]

Thanks. It'll be switched out with porn once it's shrunked down to a Lit acceptable size.

 

[pop_54]

Yo

Thanks. It'll be switched out with porn once it's shrunked down to a Lit acceptable size.

I've got some rather lovely animated gif's I'd like to use, wink, but they're just a few Kb too big for lit, maybe a good thing, might offend someone otherwise, hehe.

pops.........

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I am too tired to read everything, so please excuse me, if this has been already mentioned ....

The brother lives in a small apartment. His sister knocks on the door - she tells him that she runaway from home and wants to stay with him for the next few days.
The problem is: the brother only has a small bed and some chairs, but no couch. So they have no choice - they sleep together in the bed.

Since the parents are always drunk, they don't care much about the daughter. The girl feels alone .... when she sleeps in the bed next to her brother, she feels the need to cuddle - she missed that during the last few years.
Well, the brother is single .... since the last few years. When he sleeps so close to his sister, it feels wonderful ....
The next morning, he wakes up. His sister is laying in his arms .... and he has a hard dick that presses against her belly. She also wakes up. The brother is embarassed about his erection - but the sister laughs and gently starts to stroke his dick ....

 

[jakejarrett]

Mother/son dom/sub

My favorite incest stories involve entire families getting in the act, especially where it part of their everyday lives and basically normal.

Mother/daughter is my favorite combination.

Also enjoy the dom/sub scenarios - mother is the fuck toy of the son and/or daughter...or parents "indoctrinating" the siblings for a life of sexual servitude not only to them but to outside partners.

By the way, any recommendations for an incest story site that
a) features no age limit in their incest stories
b) doesn't require membership of adult-check (kinda like literotica)?

Thanks

Chris

 

[ifYOUcomeSoftly]

the sister could be a little sad after leaving home, depressed, not knowing what will happen with her life. brother finds her awake and crying on the couch. tries to comfort her and maybe she's had some feelings for him so she kisses him and that leads to more and soon they are making tender and sweet love on the couch.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Re: Mother/son dom/sub

My favorite incest stories involve entire families getting in the act, especially where it part of their everyday lives and basically normal.

Mother/daughter is my favorite combination.

Also enjoy the dom/sub scenarios - mother is the fuck toy of the son and/or daughter...or parents "indoctrinating" the siblings for a life of sexual servitude not only to them but to outside partners.

By the way, any recommendations for an incest story site that
a) features no age limit in their incest stories
b) doesn't require membership of adult-check (kinda like literotica)?

Thanks

Chris

"indoctrinating" the siblings for a life of sexual servitude .... it sure sounds interesting, but like you already noticed: due to the age limit, the siblings would be 18. By that age, it's hard, if not impossible to indoctrinate something to your kids ....

 

[NASCARaddicted]

the sister could be a little sad after leaving home, depressed, not knowing what will happen with her life. brother finds her awake and crying on the couch. tries to comfort her and maybe she's had some feelings for him so she kisses him and that leads to more and soon they are making tender and sweet love on the couch.

Not exactly the same, but maybe a possible start.

My (future ?) girlfriend (we are just at the beginning of our relationship) told me, that her father was a real asshole. When he was drunk, he became very aggressive and beat her and her mother. Finally, she couldn't take it anymore and run away from home (I think she was about 17 by then). She stayed away for about 1 week, before she decided to go back home.
When her father saw her, he was relieved to see that she was alive and well. He promised to never harm her again ... this lasted for about 1 week .....

So far, this was real. Now the fantasy adaption for Lit

There is this girl, she is a runaway for some reasons (maybe an evil mother or stepmother). When she comes back home, everyone is relieved, especially her father. He hugs and kisses her .... and he becomes horny.

Or, an alternative version: The girl ain't a runaway. Maybe she was captured by someone. Or, maybe she drove through a remote area, when her car broke down and she got lost in the wilderness .... When the police find her, they bring her home. Everyone is relieved. And since she suffered so much in the wilderness, her family wants to make her feel good. For example, the father takes the car and travels 30 miles to get her favorite ice cream. And the brother offers her to massage her body. So he starts to rub her back and they both become horny .....

 

[pointless]

Re: Mother/son dom/sub

My favorite incest stories involve entire families getting in the act, especially where it part of their everyday lives and basically normal.

Mother/daughter is my favorite combination.

Also enjoy the dom/sub scenarios - mother is the fuck toy of the son and/or daughter...or parents "indoctrinating" the siblings for a life of sexual servitude not only to them but to outside partners.

By the way, any recommendations for an incest story site that
a) features no age limit in their incest stories
b) doesn't require membership of adult-check (kinda like literotica)?

Thanks

Chris

have you been reading your de Sade? if you haven't try Eugenie de Franval. i won't guarentee the spelling on that as it has been awhile since i bothered reading that kinda stuff, but the indoctrination theme is the entire subject of that story. go read it if you can find it. perhaps it'll give you ideas. it's a father/daughter story mainly.

 

[pointless]

the sister could be a little sad after leaving home, depressed, not knowing what will happen with her life. brother finds her awake and crying on the couch. tries to comfort her and maybe she's had some feelings for him so she kisses him and that leads to more and soon they are making tender and sweet love on the couch.

i like this, but i'd be more likely to use this in another sister/sister story i'm trying to write. i can't help myself, i've become addicted to lesbian sisters!!