A shameless plea for feedback!

[Ray Dario]

Okay, this is a shameless plea for feedback. I have just submitted two new stories

"Naughty Fiance"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=29683

and
Pulling the Bridal Train"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=29780

and I would love to receive any feedback you kind readers (and writers) would like to offer.

Thanks
Ray

 

[English-Passion]

Hi Ray,

It was a pleasure to read both of your stories. I thoroughly enjoyed them.

Both deserved (and got) a '5' vote from me!

Cheers,

English-Passion

 

[Ray Dario]

Thanks EP

I really appreciate the feedback! It is so great to hear good things about my writing.

Ray