A Real Love Story

[NiteRidder]

I'd love to see a Real love story.

One in which all the "Love Always" Notes turn out to mean it.

One in which the kisses never grow cold or hurried.

One in which the they both want to be so close to each other
that their skins get in the way.

One that makes it clear that good sex, while an intrigal part of it,
isn't the most important part of it.

One where they both put themselves aside in favor of the "We"

One where they both realize that no one is perfect but in their eyes
their mate is close enough.

One where the words -I Love You - aren't even necessary
because they display it constantly in their every action.

One where nothing can tear it asunder.

One where they don't need fantasys.

One so wonderful that the rest of us will learn just by watching.

And one which ends with both of them walking off into the sunset together still hand in hand after years of faithfulness..... hands shaking, legs weak and with eyes that are dimmed, their bodies old tired and taxed by life's many turmoils, but still with the smiles and the love in their eyes that they started out with.

NiteRidder

 

[penguindance]

 

[NiteRidder]

A True Love Story - Delivery

Wow, when you find it, will you send it to my house? I want that!

Should I Ever Find It- NO I Won't Send It to Your House




With a sweet little body like yours - I'll Take it There.


(Sorry there are times when I just have to be nasty.
Do have a reputation to uphold. )


NiteRidder

'"D"

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

Love Stories

I'd like to be able to write one of these, but I honestly don't know how. Maybe I'll give it a go while I don't have my internet connection, though = ) I'll let you know if it turns out productive or..more likely..not

 

[penguindance]

 

[NiteRidder]

Its a tall order alright.

Lol....blushing.

Are you saying that you could give that to someone? That's a tall order. I don't know if I could. If I can, I haven't found him.

You are right it is a tall order.

Actually thought I had it once...... it came awfully close.

Don't know if there is enough left to try it again,
but I probably will someday only because I am not a quiter.

NiteRidder

Words of wisdom-
Nobody is perfect until you fall in love with them.


You like Hot Dogs don't ya-

 

[Chicklet]

The main character could be competing for the girl/guy. For instance, maybe the two of them were together a number of years before, and broke up to try new things, so that they wouldn't be tied down too early. All those years, and nothing she has experienced has been anything to compare with the boyfriend she gave up. She goes back to her home town to court him again, but he's already dating someone. This other someone is one of her friends. She's completely torn, because she knows that she wants him, that he's the only one for her, but she doesn't know if he wants her or not. And she doesn't want to hurt her friend.

Then the boy and the friend break up, and she's excited, because she can make a move now. But her best friend is so sad about it, she doesn't want to be insensative by moving in so early. She and the boy have some quick meetings that they don't want anyone to know about, they make out, proclaim love, plan their future. But during the day they have to hide it so that they won't hurt the other girl, whom they both love. Finally the girl confesses to the friend that she's in love with the guy, and the friend is sad but wants them to be happy. She gives her okay, which means a lot to the couple, and they can be together.


<sigh> that's romantic, right?

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

= p



just brainstorming, here <sulky face>

 

[NiteRidder]

I'd love to see a Real love story.

One in which all the "Love Always" Notes turn out to mean it.

One in which the kisses never grow cold or hurried.

One in which the they both want to be so close to each other
that their skins get in the way.

One that makes it clear that good sex, while an intrigal part of it,
isn't the most important part of it.

One where they both put themselves aside in favor of the "We"

One where they both realize that no one is perfect but in their eyes
their mate is close enough.

One where the words -I Love You - aren't even necessary
because they display it constantly in their every action.

One where nothing can tear it asunder.

One where they don't need fantasys.

One so wonderful that the rest of us will learn just by watching.

And one which ends with both of them walking off into the sunset together still hand in hand after years of faithfulness..... hands shaking, legs weak and with eyes that are dimmed, their bodies old tired and taxed by life's many turmoils, but still with the smiles and the love in their eyes that they started out with.

NiteRidder

Got thinking about this and decided to give it a try myself. I don't mean to say the story did all these things but like to think it nailed a few of them or at least I tried to make it do so-

Let me know what do you think ?

Catagory -Romance
Long As There Are Stars
by NiteRidder ©
An erotic Love Story set on edge of San Francisco Bay.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=51582

 

[Guest]

Re: Re: A Real Love Story

Let me know what do you think ?

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=51582

I thought it was good when I first read it.

Re-reading it makes it seem better - always a good sign.

 

[MrFrost]

i would love to read such a story..