A question

[CreamyLady]

I have a story that I wrote almost a year ago that needs some work. However, it isn't a story that would suit this site at all, being neither erotic or romantic. As a matter of fact, it's pretty damned grim in parts.

I would love to have an editor take a look at it, the cosmic overview as it were, and let me know the weak spots. I hate to ask, but I really do need an independent opinion on this.

I know everyone is really busy with Literotica editing. However, if someone has the time to just look it over, I'd appreciate it.

 

[Hecate]

I'd love to help you out since I very much like your style of writing (well, what I have seen of it so far that is *s*) ... unfortunately I am a little pressed for time because of personal matters theses days, so... all I can offer is an opinion and comments on what really "hits me into the face" ... if that would do for a starter feel free to e-mail me your grim work *s*

I am suggesting though that you keep your eyes open for a "real" editor, since as I said, I can't give you any indepth help - sorry

 

[CreamyLady]

Thank you, Hecate. You have mail.