SlickTony
Literotica Guru
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I am working on a story which is basically an intensive souping up of Genesis 19, written from the POV of Lot's younger daughter, and I am a little at a loss as to how to make it feel right. I don't want the terminology to be too soft-focus and romance-novelly, but at the same time I am kind of trying to avoid Latin or Anglo-Saxon terms as the story is set in a time which very definitely predates both of those cultures. If anyone can give me some pointers on how to make this thing feel real while avoiding anachronisms, I'd surely appreciate it.