Wifetheif
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Art and writing are two separate things of course but we all can learn from great art consider:
A panel from "Flash Gordon" by Alexander Raymond. Here we see Dale Arden for the first time since being captured by Ming the Merciless. Notice how provocatively he has dressed her. There is much more going on, however. Dale's defeated position and her inability to look her abductor in the eye, combined with Ming's shit eating grin demonstrate to astute readers, that Ming knows EXACTLY what is under Dale's dress. The shame is palpable. He, no doubt, had her strip off and dress in his presence. As they say, "It is good to be king!"
Only the best writers could express what happened between captor and captive so succinctly as Raymond does in afew brush strokes. Especially when you consider that he planted this blatant image surreptitiously in millions of Sunday papers! Less certainly is more is a good dictum for a writer. Still it would take dozens of words at a minimum to have the same impact with words. I keep this picture handy and ask myself how few words do I need to express this scenario. Then I try to write it. The exercise really hones my skills.
https://www.tumblr.com/tagged/cheesecake
A panel from "Flash Gordon" by Alexander Raymond. Here we see Dale Arden for the first time since being captured by Ming the Merciless. Notice how provocatively he has dressed her. There is much more going on, however. Dale's defeated position and her inability to look her abductor in the eye, combined with Ming's shit eating grin demonstrate to astute readers, that Ming knows EXACTLY what is under Dale's dress. The shame is palpable. He, no doubt, had her strip off and dress in his presence. As they say, "It is good to be king!"
Only the best writers could express what happened between captor and captive so succinctly as Raymond does in afew brush strokes. Especially when you consider that he planted this blatant image surreptitiously in millions of Sunday papers! Less certainly is more is a good dictum for a writer. Still it would take dozens of words at a minimum to have the same impact with words. I keep this picture handy and ask myself how few words do I need to express this scenario. Then I try to write it. The exercise really hones my skills.
https://www.tumblr.com/tagged/cheesecake