A Perfect Thunderstorm Ch 3

[sirhugs]

anybody have ideas how I can make the encounter with the granddaughter fresh while remaining true to the original?

 

[Carnevil9]

The granddaughter (who I assume is also his daughter) is a virgin, but very eager to learn.

Or she is a lesbian, but her mother has told her, "If you ever want to see what it's like with a man, you can't do better than your grandpa."

Or she is trans and has a nice big cock and balls. Yeah, that's the one.

 

[sirhugs]

The granddaughter (who I assume is also his daughter) is a virgin, but very eager to learn.

Or she is a lesbian, but her mother has told her, "If you ever want to see what it's like with a man, you can't do better than your grandpa."

Or she is trans and has a nice big cock and balls. Yeah, that's the one.

maybe she ought to be a hermaphrodite?

 

[sirhugs]

not a hermaphrodite, or a virgin, but I am 3500 words in with at least two scenes to go.
The puzzle for me is how to end up with both the big reveal about parenthood (grandad also dad) AND have daughter/mom show up unexpectedly as the cliffhanger in case there is a chapter 4. Usually bynow I have the ending at least sketched out, so could use some advice...
yeah, I know that's a risky ask.

 

[sirhugs]

Ch 3 is now up if anybody wants to read it and make suggestions for ch 4.

 

[Carnevil9]

I think the last paragraph pretty much sets up Chapter 4.

 

[sirhugs]

I have just started chapter 4. If anybody has any good ideas about how I navigate the two gals, one old guy sex I'm all ears. I've written that sort of sex before, but it has been a while. Plus I don't want to be derivative or plagiarize myself any more than I have to.

 

[DarkSollat]

Haven't read chapters 1-3, but how old are we're talking about? And how virile.

My fav position in FMF threesome is when the girls lie on top of each other, kissing and groping, and the guy fucks them both, going back and forth between their pussies.

 

[sirhugs]

Haven't read chapters 1-3, but how old are we're talking about? And how virile.

My fav position in FMF threesome is when the girls lie on top of each other, kissing and groping, and the guy fucks them both, going back and forth between their pussies.

Daughter is mid 40s by now, so Dad has to be 65+. In ch 1-3, he has had no trouble with virility.

 

[Carnevil9]

Some questions to ponder that might guide your story:

• Have the two women been intimate with each other in the past?
• If not, are they going to now?
• Have they shared a man before?