A new story in need of an edit

[dis_pac]

Hey editors:

It's me Mr. Impatience. The first thing I want to do when I finish a story is post it. No one but you guys (dear Literotica readers/writers/editors/etc.) seem to give two hoots about my writing so I am always desperate for feedback.

I have been posting blind (ie. no editor) for my last four submissions and don't want to do this again, however it has been 5 hours since the last time I read through my story and I'm chomping at the bit to get it up. Can you help me?

(I know the answer, be patient young dis. However if I was a patient man I wouldn't write twenty page stories in a week or read novels in an afternoon)

Am I just pathetic with my impatience? Anyway send me a reply and I will send you my story.

 

[LadyCibelle]

Hey editors:

It's me Mr. Impatience. The first thing I want to do when I finish a story is post it. No one but you guys (dear Literotica readers/writers/editors/etc.) seem to give two hoots about my writing so I am always desperate for feedback.

I have been posting blind (ie. no editor) for my last four submissions and don't want to do this again, however it has been 5 hours since the last time I read through my story and I'm chomping at the bit to get it up. Can you help me?

(I know the answer, be patient young dis. However if I was a patient man I wouldn't write twenty page stories in a week or read novels in an afternoon)

Am I just pathetic with my impatience? Anyway send me a reply and I will send you my story.

Hi Dis

Maybe you could tell us (the editors) what your story is about and what kind of editing you're expecting on it. There are plenty of editors, some who specialize in only ONE type of story, some others that'll do anything except X and Y genre and some that will edit anything as long as it isn't too long.

As for me, well, if you've taken a look at my Editor's profile (something you should do when looking for an editor anyway) you'll see that I'm very particular in what I will and won't edit

Good luck in finding an editor and don't get discouraged, you'll find yours

 

[dis_pac]

Good Point

I slapped my hand to my forhead right after I wrote the message that I should put that in. Here is the synopsis:

A man finds out that his long time girlfriend is leaving him for her married boss. He loses it completely and finds himself in a downward spiral of sex and drugs. It is mostly straight sex but illusions to a homosexual rape.

I'll warn you, it's a little dark.

I need editing in the full sense of it, both grammatical and just ideas for improvements.

 

[dis_pac]

I found an editor

I have sent my story off to an editor!!

Woo Hoo

Keep your eyes open for "Counting Down the Storm" it should be out in a couple weeks