A new author

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I'd like to suggest a new author (if no one minds). I've just read The Company: Marlo Chapter 1 by Sixty-nine and I think it's a great start for a series. BE WARNED, though. The story has got A LOT OF PLOT DEVELOPMENT, so it's not for you guys with a mouse in one hand and your cock in the other. This is for the readers who want a little cheese with their wine. I was very impressed by the sex scenes (one at the beginning and one at the end), though, and I think that it's definitely worth reading all the way through. Please read it and give him some kind of feedback. I'd like to see him write more installments and I'm afraid, because of his reply to my feedback, that he won't for lack of reader interest. Thanks.
 
I agree wholeheartedly...

I just started posting some of my stories, and logically came here to perhaps stoke some interest in someone reading a few of them... then found this thread with its recommendation. I read Marlo as suggested, and agree 100% with "Guilty as Charged's" endorsement.

"Sixty-Nine" has great writing style and the beginning of what could be a very interesting series in the making.

Give it a shot... and remember that the sex scenes are a part of the tale being told, not the FOCUS of the piece. The originality begins right after Marlo and Mark have their tryst in the intro.

While you're at it, give my stuff a shot, too. *L* I won't profess superiority at any stretch, but it's more literary than most, as well.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=131078

--Krypto
 
The sex scenes were great, real slam-bam, but avoiding cliche, which is tough. The rest of it was too much like my real life. 5!
 
Thank you for the positive feedback. I have an important test coming up soon, so there won't be any sequels for a while. Still, I'll try to fit in a short story or two.
 
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