---------A mother Idea----------

[Guest]

I would like to have a story of a mom (she can be any race) she is to be a happily married women, kids, nice hubby, the whole nine yds. She would never cheat on her husband, and has never thought about it. Until one day, her groing son starts looking at her a whole different way. He will start makein passes at her, she will not like the whole thing at all, she never says anything to anyone. Until one day her son uses some force on her, don't wanna say rape but something along those lines, during the fuck she at first is wanting to kill herself for this, crying, but deep down inside she kinda likes it. The son sees how much of a good fuck his hott mom is so he starts to get others to fuck her (like friends, uncles, or even some strangers.) The whole time a family friend or relative of the dads had his eyes set on her to the whole time, he finds out about the sexual ventures and gets in to on the action, again without her likein it, but lovein it mentally, all this fuckin by different ppl leads her to get pregnant, causin the dad/hubby to wonder if he did this or not! The mom has no other choice but to tell him of what happend, he does not take it good, gets divorce, leaves her to be the "UNWILLING SLUT" of the town!

 

[Chicklet]

i feel like this story has more realism to it than most of the incest ideas i hear around here.

the mother is really depressed about what her son has done, feels dirty, like any rape victim would. she doesn't want to involve anyone else in her problems because this is her son, her flesh and blood whom she loves dearly and doesn't want to get him any any trouble. the struggle is hers and hers alone as she tries to get her son to leave her alone, but he keeps pushing himself on her.

sad really, but might be a good story.

Chicklet

 

[sirhugs]

I think the idea took a left turn from realityville when "unreg" proposed the son bringing strangers to use Mom. If the story is approached, as Chicklet proposes as a realistic psychological portrait of Mom's humiliation, what is her motivation to continue past son?

Its easier to provide motivation if Mom bottles up her shame, but pushes both son and hubby away, then on her own becomes the town slut. Everyone who knew her before is shockled by her behaviour, but her secret just pulls her further down. How does she resolve this?

 

[sirhugs]

by the bye, I think reality is over-rated in erotica, like all fiction. Believability is better- what I describe as " improved reality.

The mob was never like "The Godfather", whaling was never like " Moby Dick" and what man would have been as noble as Rick in "Casablanca"?

 

[sirhugs]

and thirdly....

I still agree with Chicklet that done right, there is an excellent psychological study here somewhere. Different from anything I've seen on Lit, but worthy of a great writer .

 

[Chicklet]

I think the idea took a left turn from realityville when "unreg" proposed the son bringing strangers to use Mom.

well i'm hoping that it won't be 100 percent realistic.

strangers to her, friends to him. he's been with the wrong crowd for some time; maybe he's part of some sort of gang or something, and bringing other memebers to share his "slut"

 

[sirhugs]

well i'm hoping that it won't be 100 percent realistic.

strangers to her, friends to him. he's been with the wrong crowd for some time; maybe he's part of some sort of gang or something, and bringing other memebers to share his "slut"

but why would SHE agree? I mean, if her motivation is to keep her sex with son secret, and he's told half the town, isn't the cat in the fry pan?

 

[Chicklet]

it's not a matter of her agreeing

she's confused, distraught, scared, she doesn't know what to do. consider her state of mind; she's really, really, really unhappy and frightened. she slips into the mental state that "it's not happening" or "it's okay" - she won't object because she's found a way to slip out of reality while it's happening. maybe she's convinced herself that it *isn't* happening. stop thinking about her as this guys mom and think of her as what she is: a victim.

this is far past an erotic story at this point, of course. i tried writing a similar story (mental state type thing) and i get lots of negative feedback about how it's not very erotic. but that wasn't my point.

Chicklet

 

[Guest]

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I am glad to see that some of you have taken a likein to my idea, I agree with the both of you on the different opinions, I mean, if someone were to write it they can change it up n e way they like, it is up to them, just something along whatever i started!

 

[Jatt_81]

Sounds good

Hell ya, this story sounds like a definate write, some author with talent gotta spice it up just a lil more, den we got a cock hardening, or pussy moistureizing story among us

 

[Un-registered]

Re: Sounds good

... a cock hardening, or pussy moistureizing story among us

Is that all most readers want? I think most writers want to write good stories, not just masturbation fodder?

 

[sirhugs]

Re: Re: Sounds good

Is that all most readers want? I think most writers want to write good stories, not just masturbation fodder?

there is a thread discussing the importance (or lack of) of arousal on the Author's Hangout.

 

[Chicklet]

Re: Re: Sounds good

Is that all most readers want? I think most writers want to write good stories, not just masturbation fodder?

on the one hand, this *is* erotica

on the other hand I would rather write well than write what turns people on.

Chicklet

 

[Un-registered]

Re: Re: Re: Sounds good

on the one hand, this *is* erotica

on the other hand I would rather write well than write what turns people on.

Chicklet

It's easy for you to say that, since you do both with consummate skill.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

just to add ....

maybe after the son raped her (or forced her to have sex with him), the mother is totally devastated. I mean, her own, beloved son raped her (brutally ?) After the first time, she just crys and all that stuff. But her son keeps on raping her on every day. And now she is apathetically ... she just lays there, motionless.

The gang of the son welcome that. Since she is apathetically, they don't have to hold her or tie her down ... she just lays their, like a living dead .... so all the guys take turns on her, fucking her (dry) pussy, her tight (virgin) butthole and they cum in her mouth

 

[Guest]

aight

sounds nice nascar, but what is the point of fuckin a dead one? I mean she is not dead, but it would be like fuckin a dead body, she should still be helpless, but moans, and screams still make it better i think!