A Mature Tail

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Mashups are all the rage these days on youtube (Jane Austen Fight Club, anyone?).

It works just as well on Lit, and in Story Ideas. My Getting Old Sucks, in 2002, grew out of a thread about mature incest.

How about mature and anal.

Here's an idea, not for all tastes, and would require a writer with a "light touch" to keep it humourous, but also hot:

Edward and Agatha are an outwardly conservative middle aged couple, happily married lo these 30 years. He's an accountant, she went back to school after the kids grew up and sells real estate when she's not serving the tea at church.

what their friends and neighbours wouldn't guess is that when they were younger, Ed and Ag LOVED anal sex. Nothing made her climax as much as feeling him pump a big load into her poop chute while she fucked herself with her fingers or a dildo. And he always got hardest enjoying the tightness of her ass, especially after the kids stretched her vagina.

Unfortunately, Ag developed hemorrhoids in her 30s, and was just too shy and embarrassed to seek treatment, so they gave up this joy. Ag worried that Ed might find another ass to fuck, so she kept him well pleasured, though- he was never allowed to go to work without having his balls drained, even if it was just a quick blow job in the shower. But it was just never the same.

A few months before their 30th anniversary, Ag has her checkup. The new doctor is more through than her old GP, notes the 'roids, explains that new surgery is done as outpatient, minimal recovery. Ed has his annual fishing trip a few weeks later, so Ag secretly has the surgery then.

On the night of their anniversary, when ed gets home from work, he finds Ag naked , crouched over a stool, freshly washed ass facing the door...
 
Mashups are all the rage these days on youtube (Jane Austen Fight Club, anyone?).

It works just as well on Lit, and in Story Ideas. My Getting Old Sucks, in 2002, grew out of a thread about mature incest.

How about mature and anal.

Here's an idea, not for all tastes, and would require a writer with a "light touch" to keep it humourous, but also hot:

Edward and Agatha are an outwardly conservative middle aged couple, happily married lo these 30 years. He's an accountant, she went back to school after the kids grew up and sells real estate when she's not serving the tea at church.

what their friends and neighbours wouldn't guess is that when they were younger, Ed and Ag LOVED anal sex. Nothing made her climax as much as feeling him pump a big load into her poop chute while she fucked herself with her fingers or a dildo. And he always got hardest enjoying the tightness of her ass, especially after the kids stretched her vagina.

Unfortunately, Ag developed hemorrhoids in her 30s, and was just too shy and embarrassed to seek treatment, so they gave up this joy. Ag worried that Ed might find another ass to fuck, so she kept him well pleasured, though- he was never allowed to go to work without having his balls drained, even if it was just a quick blow job in the shower. But it was just never the same.

A few months before their 30th anniversary, Ag has her checkup. The new doctor is more through than her old GP, notes the 'roids, explains that new surgery is done as outpatient, minimal recovery. Ed has his annual fishing trip a few weeks later, so Ag secretly has the surgery then.

On the night of their anniversary, when ed gets home from work, he finds Ag naked , crouched over a stool, freshly washed ass facing the door...

That would be a pretty good piece to do. Why don't you write it up? I would definitely want to read it!
 
That would be a pretty good piece to do. Why don't you write it up? I would definitely want to read it!

I honestly don't think I could pull off the "touch" needed. Plus i just started a story requested/suggested by my editor - one for her, as she keeps editing my older man/young woman stories which aren't her thing- then after that, likely another sequel in my incest series "No more monkeys" (ch 3 headed to edit as soon as she's back from holidays). Those stories are long form, take time to write & fall is my busy work season.

I'd love to see someone take this up. :D
 
I honestly don't think I could pull off the "touch" needed. Plus i just started a story requested/suggested by my editor - one for her, as she keeps editing my older man/young woman stories which aren't her thing- then after that, likely another sequel in my incest series "No more monkeys" (ch 3 headed to edit as soon as she's back from holidays). Those stories are long form, take time to write & fall is my busy work season.

I'd love to see someone take this up. :D

If you aren't going to pursue this, I think I will then, if you don't mind. I'm not a great writer by any means, and this would be my first mature/anal story (wonder which category to submit it under?), but I would like to try, especially if someone will PM me that is comfortable editing "anal" material to check my work when it's done.
 
So, this leaves a question for me... How/why does one explain/describe the "back story"? Obviously, it wouldn't be erotic and would feel rushed if it was, in fact, rushed through in a shorter story...

Hmmm... How and/or why... Time to think!
 
So, this leaves a question for me... How/why does one explain/describe the "back story"? Obviously, it wouldn't be erotic and would feel rushed if it was, in fact, rushed through in a shorter story...

Hmmm... How and/or why... Time to think!

I doubt it would be a very short story.

Its the describing the backstory that requires the "touch".

I see it starting in media res with Ed coming home to Agatha presenting on the 30th anniversary. he's shocked. they talk, reminisce about past pleasures (thus an interval of hot sexy anal smut), past problems (which leads to an interval of hot oral smut). Then she tells him about the surgery. Then the climactic bout of hot anal smut.

But that just be because I tend to write dialogue driven stories. A better descriptive/narrative writer might have a quicker approach.
 
I love the kind of stories that start "today" and then flashback. Be it in a novel, a movie, something here, or something I've tried to write. I think it's fun. More fun than writing in a "true chronological order" or whatever. Start with the "end" and end with the "start" - or at least put the "start" in the middle or whatever and then work to a "new" ending at a later date. :)
 
I find this to be hot as hell.

The one thing that kills it is the hemroids. Yuck. How about the couple only did anal while she was pregnant, because it was the easiest position. She hated it but the husband loved every minute of it.


Then in the end, they go out on a vacation, the two of them. She's wearing a nightgown or something, she tells him she has a suprise for him, she lifts it up revealing her bare bottem, turns around, bends over, and spreads her cheecks.
 
So, this leaves a question for me... How/why does one explain/describe the "back story"? Obviously, it wouldn't be erotic and would feel rushed if it was, in fact, rushed through in a shorter story...

Hmmm... How and/or why... Time to think!

I gave the story a short background, but the story isn't really too short at 8 pages of 12pt font. Lots of bits are given throughout the story also. It is in the editors hands, and hopefully will be submitted by Monday. I can't wait til it is read and feedback is given.
 
I gave the story a short background, but the story isn't really too short at 8 pages of 12pt font. Lots of bits are given throughout the story also. It is in the editors hands, and hopefully will be submitted by Monday. I can't wait til it is read and feedback is given.

Awesome.
 
A Mature Tail is posted

I wrote the story in collaboration with "sirhugs". Please feel free to read the story and let me know what you think. A follow up story has been suggested for the nurse/patient (you'll see what i mean when you read it). Please leave me comments so that I can know if you would like more stories of this type from me. Thank you.

Story:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=492356

My other stories:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1173989&page=submissions
 
I wrote the story in collaboration with "sirhugs". Please feel free to read the story and let me know what you think. A follow up story has been suggested for the nurse/patient (you'll see what i mean when you read it). Please leave me comments so that I can know if you would like more stories of this type from me. Thank you.

Story:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=492356

My other stories:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1173989&page=submissions

when meathead says "collaboration" he is being too generous - he wrote it, starting from my basic idea. and I say that not to distance myself from it, because I'd love to steal some credit - I think it's a great fun , hot read- better than I ever imagined.

Thanks, meathead, for doing it.
 
when meathead says "collaboration" he is being too generous - he wrote it, starting from my basic idea. and I say that not to distance myself from it, because I'd love to steal some credit - I think it's a great fun , hot read- better than I ever imagined.

Thanks, meathead, for doing it.

:eek:

Thanks for the kudo's. Happy reading everyone!
 
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