A Little Rhythm, A Little Blues

[litchipking]

I have been so pleased with the feedback I received from my first story and I'm really hoping to hear from many of you on my second. I really do listen to those of you who offer meaningful critiques.

Thanks again to grumpyg for the editorial help.

My second story:
"A Little Rhythm, A Little Blues"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=353194

My first story (just in case you missed it):
"Undercover Rock"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=345064


I didn't set out to write two stories that both had a musical theme but I do have a little music background and I guess it just came out.

Thanks in advance to all who read, vote and respond.

Chip King

 

[litchipking]

Site glitch

It seems that getting to read all of my story is a bit difficult.

The first time I click on it I get only one page of the story. If I then go back and click again, I get all four pages. I was tipped off to this by a disgruntled reader who complained that he hated "half-stories".

I'm not angry at the webmasters (I know it takes a lot of effort to get this whole thing to work and my problem is a small one). I shot them a "story problem" message. If I should do something else, someone let me know. But I am disappointed that there is no way to tell the readers that I didn't really short-change them; that there is a whole story hidden in there.

Not that votes are everything, but the first thirty votes for this story were at 4.9 something. Since the gllitch (and several upset readers) it had fallen to 4.6 something. Not the end of the world, but I am pretty new to this and I haven't yet told anyone I know that I am writing. The votes and comments are my only clue as to how I am doing and if what I think is a good story, actually is.

Really I'm just disappointed and wanted to share with the only group of people who could understand my feelings. There, I feel better already.

Please visit my story - TWICE - and let me know if you like it. My last few readers have really brought me down. Remember, if you only read the first page, you miss all the sex.

A Little Rhythm, A Little Blues
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=353194

Thanks everyone for listening.