A Little Help

[toxic_dreams]

I have this problem I can write fantasy,and basically anything except if it has sexual situations certain points make me weirded out. How can I get over this so I can prolong my writing?

Because I have this idea with the girl who falls in love with a noble man and to prove her love and loyalty she has to make love to him. I can not write the scene in the sexual situation and needed some advice.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... I can not write the scene in the sexual situation and needed some advice.

Don't even try to force yourself. If you are not comfortable writing it, it will not come out right.

I am firmly heterosexual and male, so my characters never indulge in MM sex because I find such scenes distasteful. I know, intellectually, that there are people who enjoy such activities, and good luck to them, but I could never write such a scene convincingly.

 

[Carnevil9]

Interesting, Snooper. I am staunchly hetero, and have never had anything even remotely resembling a homosexual experience. Yet I have no problem writing about it.

I hear that Jules Verne never actually went to the moon, either. Yet somehow he managed to write a fairly successful book about it!......Carney

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... I hear that Jules Verne never actually went to the moon, either. Yet somehow he managed to write a fairly successful book about it!......Carney

Depends on your definition of "successful". I doubt anyone who has been to the moon would recognise his description as being accurate! That, of course, does not matter, but many of our readers have MM experience and would be very critical of technical inaccuracies.

 

[BrazenFellow]

Technical inaccuracies? Forgive me, as I have no personal experience of such, but I can't imagine it's particularly complicated. Certainly not in comparison to heterosexual sex, the principles are about the same.

I've not written homosexual scenes because when I write something I'm describing something I've already got visualized. I don't fantasize about homosexual activity so I don't write it - simple enough. If your technique is different or you're not self-limited in what you'll visualize and describe you can write homosexual scenes.

What I'm trying to drive at, I suppose, is that I doubt our homosexual readership here on Literotica would be particularly critical. You're literate, at least, so that puts you ahead of many authors whose works are listed.

 

[toxic_dreams]

I'm a chick not a dude if you guys don't know. All the girls I know can write sexually and for some strange reason I can't.Maybe their is something wrong with me?

 

[emap]

Nothing wrong with you. You just gotta open your eyes next time you have sex.

Well helps if you can say remember what you are seeing, sights sounds smells and what you are feeling are basically all you need to describe a sex scene unless you are doing a third person setting at which point really all you gotta do is watch porn and describe what you are watching.

Now a good sex scene isn't insert tab A into slot B and repeat for a while before he has an orgasm and they finish. A good sex scene sets the stage alludes to what is happening and the reader can visualize what is going on. Us perverted story writers are simply doing amateur porn for the mind, we skip the visual part and put it straight into the head of the reader.

You don't even have to use the standard words, you can do an erotic sex scene without ever saying cock pussy or fuck. Which of course puts you somewhere between romance novels and the stories on here.

Here quick example cause I'm bored:
Finally the night is here, I've been waiting for this for ages. At long last my betrothed and I are married, I am to be his forever. He deposits me on the bed gently before turning to the nice bellhop to tip him and shut the door.

Door locked he turns to me with a grin to his lips, his tuxedo falling off him as he comes closer. Shirt undone, jacket gone he climbs atop me his hands traveling over my body touching me in all the right spots. Soon he has his head buried between my legs lips against me there and I am moaning his name.

He stops and crawls back up me, my legs hooked into his arms where I can't help but laugh because my panties are dangling from my foot. My laughter dies as he enters me and I am again lost in the throes of his passion, I don't know how many times I scream his name before he is groaning his own release but after neither of us has the energy to undress, we simply fall asleep in each others arms.

 

[pink_unicorns]

toxic are you still a virgin? I mean maybe that is why you can't write a sex scene or maybe you need a break through from something that happened in child hood?

 

[toxic_dreams]

no to both well I don't think I need a break through.