A little help here, please!

[Oazeal]

I've been trying to post a story but, it keeps getting bounce back. The complaint from Literotica is always the same:

"Dear Writer,

Thank you for your submission to Literotica. We appreciate the time and effort you've taken to write a story and submit it to our site . However, we've found that we cannot post your submission in its current form. The checklist below may help you in re-examining your manuscript.

• Please fix the formatting of your dialogue. The essay "How to Make Characters Talk" in our Writer's Resources section has more information on the formatting of dialogue if you have further questions: https://www.literotica.com/s/how-to-make-characters-talk

Please feel free to re-submit the story after a Volunteer Editor has examined it, or after you've made revisions. You can find a list of Volunteer Editors here.

Please consult our Writer's Resources section and make sure you read our submission guidelines.
If you have any questions on these, please let us know.

Thanks for your time, and look forward to reading you again!

Laurel & Manu
Literotica.Com"

I've already made corrections, twice and they sent it back to me a third time. I really they be more specific in pointing out their objections. I've been over the story several time but I find no additional errors. Perhaps a new set of eyes is needed. It's a brief story, only 1,970 words. Please contact me as soon as you can.

 

[SyleusSnow]

I can take a look at it. I'll send you a private message