SexyRed0723
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I have never written anything sexual outside of a chat; however... this came to me earlier and I don't know where I should post it (or even IF) to get critique, etc. It is a VERY rough draft, written off the top of my head, but if I don't post it somewhere now, I will lose my nerve and delete it.
Whatever comments you have, please try to be constructive. I've never done this before so...
During the course of a chat with my friend, he sounded excited when I told him that since he wasn't available to entertain me, you had entertained me online. I realized he would likely be quite surprised and, in agony, should he find himself the 3rd party in an afternoon tryst.
After a major disagreement, I brought him back to the apartment under the guise of forgiveness and makeup sex. Climbing the stairs, he could see just the edge of my thigh hi stockings under the skirt I was wearing. Entering the apartment, it was pitch dark. Rather than turn on lights, I lit a select few candles and led him straight to the bed. He was excited because we were skipping any preludes in the living room and moving directly to the bedroom. His cock surged a little as he watched me sway towards the bed.
I climbed onto the bed on my hands and knees. He could see the edge of my pussy lips on either side of my thong since my pink skirt had ridden up over my ass. My prim black blouse was doing little to hold back my 36F breasts while I was bent over that way. My back was to Kevin. My head facing the headboard. I glanced back at him over my shoulder and indicated he should stand still a moment.
I reached under my skirt and ran my fingers on the outside of my pussy lips, showcasing them for Kevin, knowing how hot it made him to watch me masturbate. He would frequently explode within mere minutes of watching. I used this to my advantage knowing he would be captivated. Running my finger lightly up and down my thong covered slit, my hips undulating, Kevin was completely mine at that point.
I turned in the bed and beckoned him to me, unbuckling his belt and unzipping his pants. His cock was hard and the head was already standing up out of his pants. I lightly grazed his head with my fingertips and motioned for him to lie down on the bed beside of me. He stripped his shirt over his head and tossed it on the floor. His attention was focused solely on my fingers slipping up and down my now wet thong. I had yet to slip them under the thong but it was clear that I was wet. He quickly climbed into the bed, positioning himself flat on his back in the center of the bed.
Once he was there, I traced his chest with my fingernail and, in a sultry voice, told him that after all we had been through today, I had a special surprise for him. He got that smile... the one that said he couldn't wait... the one that I knew meant he thought he had hit the jackpot. I pulled out a few ties and told him that this was a super special surprise and I didn't trust him to not ruin it, so I was going to tie him to the bed. He continued to smile, only making a slight passing comment against it. I tied him tight, with little trouble. Once he was completely tied down, still with his pants on and his cock springing uncomfortably from them, I stood over his face on the bed. He was looking directly up my skirt as I ran my now slick fingers up and down my thong. I tugged on the front of the thong pulling the thin slip of material further into my slit, moaning slightly. I reached up with one hand and started massaging my breast, twisting the nipple and pinching at it. He was visibly hungry to taste me. I asked him if he was hungry for a taste. He could only nod. I dipped a finger quickly into my pussy and whimpered at the first invasion of my silky wet hole. My finger slid out covered in juices. Still standing on the bed over Kevin, I leaned over from the waist with my finger out. He opened his mouth in anticipation. His disappointment was an audible, "NO!" as I stuck my finger in my mouth and sucked the juice off myself. He was going crazy. I braced myself on the headboard, still bent at the waist and slipped my finger into my pussy, in and out and up to my clit to circle and back... I was clearly into the show. After several times of slipping a finger in, I moaned outloud, "I need a cock!". Before Kevin could utter a word, from behind me, from the direction of the closet, the sound of the door opening completely. Kevin was clearly surprised to hear another man say, "I have what you need right here."
Unbeknownst to him, I had brought you to the apartment earlier and directed you to the closet at the foot of the bed where you would have a clear view of the pre-show through the slats in the door. Now that you had announced yourself, I pulled you up to stand on the bed with me, over Kevin. His eyes were wide, his mouth gaping. He couldn't believe there was another man in his bed. You step up behind me running your hands up my legs and under my skirt, with Kevin left to lay under us and watch your hands stroke my skin. After several minutes, he has begged and demanded enough that gag him with my strap on that was in the nightstand. I don't have to be wearing it to fill his mouth with it. You slip my thong off, and just to be mean, drape it over the dildo in his mouth so he is left to smell my arousal at being with you. His eyes follow your fingers every movement as they slip in and out of my pussy, circling my clit. It's clear by how you move your hands that you have had your hands all over my wet mound before.
When he seemed to relax a little and become complacent, I knew it was time to finish our little punishment for him. He had no idea what hit him. One minute I'm standing over him with my pussy so far out of reach and the next, I'm on my knees, hands on the headboard over his head. He can see how engorged my clit is... it is directly over his face. He could almost enjoy the sight of my wetness over his face.... almost... until he feels your balls brush his chest as you push forward. Suddenly my juices are dripping on his face as you fuck me hard and fast. Your balls slap the under side of his chin over and over, your hands are squeezing my tits and he has a front row seat for it. He thrashes against the restraints but I had prepared well for this punishment. My pussy is being plowed by another man within inches of his dildo filled mouth. One of your hand slips down to finger my clit as the other grips my tit. I scream out in sheer pleasure of being fucked over his face. My pussy is no longer just dripping, it is pouring. Juices pouring all over Kevin's face. Just when he thinks it can't get any worse, you tell him to take a good look... a good look at how much pussy juice is pouring out of me while you fuck me. He starts to pull at his restraints again, only to find that it puts his face closer and closer to the junction of your cock and my pussy. He stops struggling but looks on in a look of utter shock. My body starts to convulse and I thrash wildly. You grip my hips to steady me and use your right hand to slap my ass hard... very hard.... I scream out in simultaneous pain and pleasure as you remind him that you just left the mark of a real man on his woman. With that final cutting remark, you erupt into a volcanic explosion of cum, never stopping your thrusts. Mixed cum from us both splatters all over Kevin's face as we tumble from the pinnacle of ecstasy.
We crumple onto Kevin and lay still for several minutes. Finally, you are able to disentangle yourself from me and stand up next to the bed. I pull myself up on my elbows and knees to see you erect again. Leaning over Kevin, my lips meet the head of your cock and suck you in with a long, slow tonguing to clean our cum off. You smile, pull my head away, kiss me gently and turn away. As you gather your clothes and walk out of the room you glance back to make eye contact with the raging mad Kevin and say only, "Thanks''. Turning back towards the door your eyes linger only on the almost purple, engorged cock now bulging out of Kevin's pants.
Maybe it was a little bit of a punishment and a little bit reward after all...
Whatever comments you have, please try to be constructive. I've never done this before so...
During the course of a chat with my friend, he sounded excited when I told him that since he wasn't available to entertain me, you had entertained me online. I realized he would likely be quite surprised and, in agony, should he find himself the 3rd party in an afternoon tryst.
After a major disagreement, I brought him back to the apartment under the guise of forgiveness and makeup sex. Climbing the stairs, he could see just the edge of my thigh hi stockings under the skirt I was wearing. Entering the apartment, it was pitch dark. Rather than turn on lights, I lit a select few candles and led him straight to the bed. He was excited because we were skipping any preludes in the living room and moving directly to the bedroom. His cock surged a little as he watched me sway towards the bed.
I climbed onto the bed on my hands and knees. He could see the edge of my pussy lips on either side of my thong since my pink skirt had ridden up over my ass. My prim black blouse was doing little to hold back my 36F breasts while I was bent over that way. My back was to Kevin. My head facing the headboard. I glanced back at him over my shoulder and indicated he should stand still a moment.
I reached under my skirt and ran my fingers on the outside of my pussy lips, showcasing them for Kevin, knowing how hot it made him to watch me masturbate. He would frequently explode within mere minutes of watching. I used this to my advantage knowing he would be captivated. Running my finger lightly up and down my thong covered slit, my hips undulating, Kevin was completely mine at that point.
I turned in the bed and beckoned him to me, unbuckling his belt and unzipping his pants. His cock was hard and the head was already standing up out of his pants. I lightly grazed his head with my fingertips and motioned for him to lie down on the bed beside of me. He stripped his shirt over his head and tossed it on the floor. His attention was focused solely on my fingers slipping up and down my now wet thong. I had yet to slip them under the thong but it was clear that I was wet. He quickly climbed into the bed, positioning himself flat on his back in the center of the bed.
Once he was there, I traced his chest with my fingernail and, in a sultry voice, told him that after all we had been through today, I had a special surprise for him. He got that smile... the one that said he couldn't wait... the one that I knew meant he thought he had hit the jackpot. I pulled out a few ties and told him that this was a super special surprise and I didn't trust him to not ruin it, so I was going to tie him to the bed. He continued to smile, only making a slight passing comment against it. I tied him tight, with little trouble. Once he was completely tied down, still with his pants on and his cock springing uncomfortably from them, I stood over his face on the bed. He was looking directly up my skirt as I ran my now slick fingers up and down my thong. I tugged on the front of the thong pulling the thin slip of material further into my slit, moaning slightly. I reached up with one hand and started massaging my breast, twisting the nipple and pinching at it. He was visibly hungry to taste me. I asked him if he was hungry for a taste. He could only nod. I dipped a finger quickly into my pussy and whimpered at the first invasion of my silky wet hole. My finger slid out covered in juices. Still standing on the bed over Kevin, I leaned over from the waist with my finger out. He opened his mouth in anticipation. His disappointment was an audible, "NO!" as I stuck my finger in my mouth and sucked the juice off myself. He was going crazy. I braced myself on the headboard, still bent at the waist and slipped my finger into my pussy, in and out and up to my clit to circle and back... I was clearly into the show. After several times of slipping a finger in, I moaned outloud, "I need a cock!". Before Kevin could utter a word, from behind me, from the direction of the closet, the sound of the door opening completely. Kevin was clearly surprised to hear another man say, "I have what you need right here."
Unbeknownst to him, I had brought you to the apartment earlier and directed you to the closet at the foot of the bed where you would have a clear view of the pre-show through the slats in the door. Now that you had announced yourself, I pulled you up to stand on the bed with me, over Kevin. His eyes were wide, his mouth gaping. He couldn't believe there was another man in his bed. You step up behind me running your hands up my legs and under my skirt, with Kevin left to lay under us and watch your hands stroke my skin. After several minutes, he has begged and demanded enough that gag him with my strap on that was in the nightstand. I don't have to be wearing it to fill his mouth with it. You slip my thong off, and just to be mean, drape it over the dildo in his mouth so he is left to smell my arousal at being with you. His eyes follow your fingers every movement as they slip in and out of my pussy, circling my clit. It's clear by how you move your hands that you have had your hands all over my wet mound before.
When he seemed to relax a little and become complacent, I knew it was time to finish our little punishment for him. He had no idea what hit him. One minute I'm standing over him with my pussy so far out of reach and the next, I'm on my knees, hands on the headboard over his head. He can see how engorged my clit is... it is directly over his face. He could almost enjoy the sight of my wetness over his face.... almost... until he feels your balls brush his chest as you push forward. Suddenly my juices are dripping on his face as you fuck me hard and fast. Your balls slap the under side of his chin over and over, your hands are squeezing my tits and he has a front row seat for it. He thrashes against the restraints but I had prepared well for this punishment. My pussy is being plowed by another man within inches of his dildo filled mouth. One of your hand slips down to finger my clit as the other grips my tit. I scream out in sheer pleasure of being fucked over his face. My pussy is no longer just dripping, it is pouring. Juices pouring all over Kevin's face. Just when he thinks it can't get any worse, you tell him to take a good look... a good look at how much pussy juice is pouring out of me while you fuck me. He starts to pull at his restraints again, only to find that it puts his face closer and closer to the junction of your cock and my pussy. He stops struggling but looks on in a look of utter shock. My body starts to convulse and I thrash wildly. You grip my hips to steady me and use your right hand to slap my ass hard... very hard.... I scream out in simultaneous pain and pleasure as you remind him that you just left the mark of a real man on his woman. With that final cutting remark, you erupt into a volcanic explosion of cum, never stopping your thrusts. Mixed cum from us both splatters all over Kevin's face as we tumble from the pinnacle of ecstasy.
We crumple onto Kevin and lay still for several minutes. Finally, you are able to disentangle yourself from me and stand up next to the bed. I pull myself up on my elbows and knees to see you erect again. Leaning over Kevin, my lips meet the head of your cock and suck you in with a long, slow tonguing to clean our cum off. You smile, pull my head away, kiss me gently and turn away. As you gather your clothes and walk out of the room you glance back to make eye contact with the raging mad Kevin and say only, "Thanks''. Turning back towards the door your eyes linger only on the almost purple, engorged cock now bulging out of Kevin's pants.
Maybe it was a little bit of a punishment and a little bit reward after all...
Good short story, You can lengthen it if you really want to flush out your other characters or leave it as it is for people that want to put themselves in the role of your mystery man. 
I will see if I can find a touch of inspiration and maybe revise this one, then start the next chapter. 
