A Lady Could use a Hand - or Two!

[Elise]

I have read, but never understood the non-consent/reluctance stories. Now that one has acted itself out for me in my life I am willing to give the details to a writier. I think going through what happened might help me process my conflicting feelings. Contact me if you want to write it up.

 

[SylentKnight]

I Would Love It

I would love to hear more details - let me know something about you!

 

[chris 44]

I have read, but never understood the non-consent/reluctance stories. Now that one has acted itself out for me in my life I am willing to give the details to a writier. I think going through what happened might help me process my conflicting feelings. Contact me if you want to write it up.

Me too, sent you a PM, just get back to me if you feel comfortable.
Chris

 

[Stella_Omega]

I would love to hear more details - let me know something about you!

Elise- and no disrespect to you, Sylentkinght- take a moment to check out any writer's work before you give up your tale, make sure the specific person writes in a way that suits your story.

 

[SeaCat]

I have to second what Stell Omega has said. Before sending the information check out that persons stories. Make sure their style is the one in which you would like your story told.

Cat

 

[gauchecritic]

I have to second what Stell Omega has said. Before sending the information check out that persons stories. Make sure their style is the one in which you would like your story told.

Cat

And then ask someone independant (The?) to read it and to see if it comes across in the way you think it ought.


Elise: So, what did you make of the story?

Independant reader: Well the female protaganist was a right sloppy, demanding, manipulative piece of crap.

???

 

[Stella_Omega]

And then ask someone independant (The?) to read it and to see if it comes across in the way you think it ought.


Elise: So, what did you make of the story?

Independant reader: Well the female protaganist was a right sloppy, demanding, manipulative piece of crap.

???

And that piece of writing.. would be non-consent all over again! Not good, not good.

 

[TheEarl]

And then ask someone independant (The?) to read it and to see if it comes across in the way you think it ought.


Elise: So, what did you make of the story?

Independant reader: Well the female protaganist was a right sloppy, demanding, manipulative piece of crap.

???

Nice to be name-dropped.

The Earl

 

[Elise]

Thanks

Just wanted to say thanks for all of the posts and PM's this is kinda exciting for an old girl

 

[Boxlicker101]

I have read, but never understood the non-consent/reluctance stories. Now that one has acted itself out for me in my life I am willing to give the details to a writier. I think going through what happened might help me process my conflicting feelings. Contact me if you want to write it up.

Most of my stories in the first person have been written based on what female readers have told me about themselves. However, they are basically stroke stories. It that's what you are looking for, I might be able to do it.

 

[Elise]

More Details

Well, the details of mne are that Iam in my 40's and not what I used to be but still get looks. I am pretty quiet and conservative which is why the incident rocked my world. What else do you want to know?

 

[SylentKnight]

Have I?

Have I seen pics of you on here before? I am sure I have but can't find them now.

 

[Elise]

What would You Say

What would you say is the best characteristic fo erotic writing?

 

[Stella_Omega]

What would you say is the best characteristic fo erotic writing?

me, personally?

I would say that I judge erotic writing in exactly the same way I judge any writing. It must be lucid, flowing, entertaining, and have at least one butt-plug in it

I'm joking about the butt plug. Sort of...

But there are so many ways to judge a story.
Which part of an erotic story are you asking about?

If you looked at my stories, for instance, you'd see several different approaches. Some of them are graphic descriptions, some of them have a more high-falutin' dreamy tone (I hope)

Some of them have a LOT of dialogue, some have almost none. Some of my stories go right into the action, one is almost no action at all- just build up and build up and build up, and then... a couple of paragraphs near the end.

One story gets me complaints about my lousy grammar. But to me, the "lousy grammar" is a deliberate choice, setting the tone of a post-apocalyptic society.

One gets me complaints about my snarky attitude towards the Renaissance Faire.

I think, the thing I want to see, mostly... is a change of some sort, registered in the characters, as a result of the sexual action. I want the sex to be completely necessary in the story. From what you've said, that's a given in your story!

Does that help at all?