a haiku is more than 5-7-5

[WCSGarland]

Iron... Steel...
What's a few molecules of carbon between them?
Complaints?

 

[SmilingLez]

Words creep softly in.
Subjective, they overtake;
Conquer, no prisoners.

 

[AlinaX]

read no recipes
the flavour of a kiss
is subjective

 

[SmilingLez]

True love’s gentle gift,
Mutual warmth, not shadows -
Hearts in harmony.

 

[AlinaX]

true love shattering glass
unwanted kiss

 

[SmilingLez]

Sailors, hats, and maps,
Finding new pizza joints —
Columbus's snack!

 

[AlinaX]

round knife and round plate
salami! pepperoni!
pizza all around

 

[kreemi_pi]

Haiku is much more
Than just five sev five, you know
Needs a topic, yo

 

[kreemi_pi]

Haiku is much more
Than just five sev five, you know
Needs a topic, yo

Kreemi_pi that sucks
Worst haiku i've ever seen
But your tits are nice

 

[AlinaX]

your tits look great
no, wait... they're blue
must be cold out

 

[kreemi_pi]

your tits look great
no, wait... they're blue
must be cold out

yes it's cold, hard nips
Warm them with your sexy tongue
My vagina next

 

[AlinaX]

spilling seed
a tit in the bush
worth two in the hand?

 

[WCSGarland]

Watching two tits,
Flitter back and forth,
This bush, that bush, no limb untouched.

 

[AlinaX]

yes it's cold, hard nips
Warm them with your sexy tongue
My vagina next

my sexy tongue
at the dry cleaner's
no fun there

 

[kreemi_pi]

No five seven five?
What the fuck is going on?
Fuck my fucking life.

 

[kreemi_pi]

Did I do it wrong?
Thought i knew the haiku rules.
MY LIFE IS A LIE

 

[WCSGarland]

Fret not kreemi_pi,
Seventeen syllables, three lines or less,
You're good.

 

[kreemi_pi]

So
I can cram more syllables into second line
And just end here?

 

[kreemi_pi]

That
Seems too easy
Yo

 

[AlinaX]

the point of this thread
is not to write seventeen
without good reason

 

[kreemi_pi]

Please go read my Tan
kas, They are better than my
Five sev 5 haikus

 

[SmilingLez]

In sacred silence,
God's presence gently whispers,
Love beats in each heart.

 

[AlinaX]

annointed
by man, not God
who watches

 

[WCSGarland]

You're all I want for now,
But you're jealous of my attention still.

Expressing your desire,
That I should ever only make love to you.

It feels like you want a promise,
That I will never want another.

I have in the past and may again in future,
for my heart is fickle.

Yet I'm still with you today,
Probably so - through the end of my time.

 

[SmilingLez]

Moist skin glistens soft,
Swollen with desire’s fire,
An explosion of bliss.