A girl like Me--- My first poem on LIT

[CocoCream]

Fellas, gents and men. Hello and good night to you all. If I may have your attention for just a moment or two, I'd love to know what you think about my open--first on lit and actually improvised as I wrote it. I was too lazy to find the right place to post this separate from the threads so please let me know what you think.

A Girl Like Me

The sun's rays, kiss me
They massage me with melanin
Deep into my skin
Dipped in buttery oils

I have something rich
Bitter to the fearful
Yet so arousing

You want to try
You want to explore my regions
You've been scared to give in
But you want to be with me

You know how sweet I must taste
You cringe at the thought of licking me
My blackberry is glistening
Raining fresh juices from it's core

You think about cleaning up
With me on your platter
Maybe without a napkin
Maybe without a rubber---whoa

You want me raw
No extra spices or seasoning
You just want to know
You just want to try
You want to experience

You want to be with a girl like me

 

[johnfrederick]

First Comment

A lovely poem...erotic w/ out being raunchy

 

[cliteatingman]

Fellas, gents and men. Hello and good night to you all. If I may have your attention for just a moment or two, I'd love to know what you think about my open--first on lit and actually improvised as I wrote it. I was too lazy to find the right place to post this separate from the threads so please let me know what you think.

A Girl Like Me

The sun's rays, kiss me
They massage me with melanin
Deep into my skin
Dipped in buttery oils

I have something rich
Bitter to the fearful
Yet so arousing

You want to try
You want to explore my regions
You've been scared to give in
But you want to be with me

You know how sweet I must taste
You cringe at the thought of licking me
My blackberry is glistening
Raining fresh juices from it's core

You think about cleaning up
With me on your platter
Maybe without a napkin
Maybe without a rubber---whoa

You want me raw
No extra spices or seasoning
You just want to know
You just want to try
You want to experience

You want to be with a girl like me

Great poem!

 

[cf23430]

Wow. Absolutely loved it. Thanks for sharing

 

[CocoCream]

Wow. Absolutely loved it. Thanks for sharing

Thank you, you are welcome!

 

[CocoCream]

A lovely poem...erotic w/ out being raunchy

Thanks for the feedback

 

[cliteatingman]

I would not mind a close encounter with the poet!

 

[willrose]

A buttered CocoCream on a platter? To quote the philosopher Aristotle, "PWHOOOAAARRRR!!!! LUVVERLY!!!"

 

[TheMogul40]

Fellas, gents and men. Hello and good night to you all. If I may have your attention for just a moment or two, I'd love to know what you think about my open--first on lit and actually improvised as I wrote it. I was too lazy to find the right place to post this separate from the threads so please let me know what you think.

A Girl Like Me

The sun's rays, kiss me
They massage me with melanin
Deep into my skin
Dipped in buttery oils

I have something rich
Bitter to the fearful
Yet so arousing

You want to try
You want to explore my regions
You've been scared to give in
But you want to be with me

You know how sweet I must taste
You cringe at the thought of licking me
My blackberry is glistening
Raining fresh juices from it's core

You think about cleaning up
With me on your platter
Maybe without a napkin
Maybe without a rubber---whoa

You want me raw
No extra spices or seasoning
You just want to know
You just want to try
You want to experience

You want to be with a girl like me

Great first poem .. I look forward to reading more ....

 

[Lost_Yonder]

raw Coco juices
flowing, so hypnotizing
want a girl like you!

a little haiku in response to your very arousing poem...

 

[innershR]

I really enjoyed this !

Makes me want to get back into reading poetry again.

Thanks.

 

[CocoCream]

Followed up my poem with a pic thread

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=852371

In case you were wondering

 

[Bigman57]

The poem and photo were both arousing. Thank you