I've just submitted the third installment of my fantasy story "A Free Man's Passion," about an enslaved man caught up in a women-controlled sex-crazed society. Please read the stories and give me feedback. Thanks.
These are the three chapters of my futuristic fantasy, A Free Man's Passion. I'd appreciate your comments. Personally, I found several typos once I submitted, of course. (Wish there was a way to correct stories after the fact.) I also am not entirely satisfied with what I felt was a tendency to go to cliches. Anyway, what did you like about them, and where would you suggest improvements be made?
