A farewell to smut

[Keroin]

And so ends my smut writing career, lol.

Finally got around to finishing my little South Pacific trilogy - thanks to some gentle nudging, (thanks YC )

For anyone who's interested, here it is...

Sommer Storms Ch 3

And if you haven't read the first two chapters, (and you want to), they start here...

Sommer Storms Ch 1

As always, feedback is very welcome and appreciated.

Since I'm so busy with "real" writing these days, I doubt I'll be penning any more smut for a long time. But it was a fun little hobby while I was stranded on a desert island.

Anyway, I wanted to say thanks to all my pervy friends on here who have read, commented and inspired me. I tip my hat to you all. Meitaki m'ata.

http://i892.photobucket.com/albums/ac126/Keroin/KsPartyDress-1.jpg

 

[where]

I enjoyed it. very much.

 

[ShyGuy68]

I'll give them a read soon, it'll be interesting to see what your mind have come up with!

Btw. you look great in that dress! I love the way your nipples are peeking through it, I wish I could see that for real

 

[Keroin]

I enjoyed it. very much.

Thanks Kybele

 

[Keroin]

I'll give them a read soon, it'll be interesting to see what your mind have come up with!

Btw. you look great in that dress! I love the way your nipples are peeking through it, I wish I could see that for real

LOL, thanks ShyGuy

 

[ShyGuy68]

LOL, thanks ShyGuy

You're quite welcome. and yes I know, I'm a pervert!

 

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[satindesire]

I agree, your boobs are fantastic! Absolutely perfectly proportioned to you.

 

[Keroin]

I agree, your boobs are fantastic! Absolutely perfectly proportioned to you.

A flattering angle and outfit don't hurt, either, lol.

Thanks for the compliment, Satin.

 

[Seurat]

Two bonuses in one day; very pleasant.

Thanks, Keroin!

 

[Keroin]

Two bonuses in one day; very pleasant.

Thanks, Keroin!

You're very welcome! Thanks for the read

 

[Sir_Winston54]

http://i892.photobucket.com/albums/ac126/Keroin/KsPartyDress-1.jpg

Added to my little collection of Keroin pix.

 

[Keroin]

Added to my little collection of Keroin pix.

You flatter me SW.

Not that there's anything wrong with that! LOL.

 

[Sir_Winston54]

You flatter me SW.

Not that there's anything wrong with that! LOL.

Not flattery at all. Just a statement of fact.

 

[YourCaptor]

You'll be back.

And hot pic. Fuck that penguin must have had it made. Beautiful island, secluded, and a lovely woman. Does it get better? seriously, does it?

 

[Keroin]

You'll be back.

And hot pic. Fuck that penguin must have had it made. Beautiful island, secluded, and a lovely woman. Does it get better? seriously, does it?

Yes it does. If the island was made of chocolate, for example, it would be better.



LOL. Thanks for the compliments YC. And for the gentle nudge to finish my "masterpiece". I actually feel bad because I've had two comments from readers who are looking forward to the next installment. But there is no next installment. Oops.

 

[Keroin]

Sommer Storms Ch 3 has a score of 4.67 and 18 votes, which means ten people gave it 5 stars, four people gave it 4 stars, three people gave it 3.7 stars, one person thought about giving it 2 stars but then felt guilty and gave it 3 stars only to drive to the local library, sign in under an alt, and give it 2 stars as they'd originally planned, one person was drunk and gave it one star, (boy are they going to feel stupid in the morning!), and and twelve people tried, unsuccessfully, to give it zero stars using only tin foil hats and the power of their minds.

Thankfully, the mob has not been able to silence me this time! But if I smell a whiff of vote rigging I shall be contacting my lawyer and demanding that the perpetrators be made to walk the plank while singing the theme from Man of LaMancha.

~smiles~


(Sorry, couldn't resist - I'll go beat myself with a frozen trout, as punishment).

 

[rida]

Bookmarked to read as soon as possible!

And the picture? hot, Hot, HOT! (and a good way to bribe the mob into giving you 5 stars )

 

[sinnocence]

Psshh. I gave you a five. I loved the stories. Very, very good.

And yes, hawt pic.

 

[Keroin]

Bookmarked to read as soon as possible!

And the picture? hot, Hot, HOT! (and a good way to bribe the mob into giving you 5 stars )

I am not above bribery

Thanks for the bookmarking and the complimenting, Lovely Rida meter maid.

Psshh. I gave you a five. I loved the stories. Very, very good.

And yes, hawt pic.

You rock with full hardness. Thanks, S.

 

[Homburg]

Sommer Storms Ch 3 has a score of 4.67 and 18 votes, which means ten people gave it 5 stars, four people gave it 4 stars, three people gave it 3.7 stars, one person thought about giving it 2 stars but then felt guilty and gave it 3 stars only to drive to the local library, sign in under an alt, and give it 2 stars as they'd originally planned, one person was drunk and gave it one star, (boy are they going to feel stupid in the morning!), and and twelve people tried, unsuccessfully, to give it zero stars using only tin foil hats and the power of their minds.

Thankfully, the mob has not been able to silence me this time! But if I smell a whiff of vote rigging I shall be contacting my lawyer and demanding that the perpetrators be made to walk the plank while singing the theme from Man of LaMancha.

~smiles~


(Sorry, couldn't resist - I'll go beat myself with a frozen trout, as punishment).

I LOL'ed. Literally. Okay, I smiled and snorted cheerfully, but you get the point. And, yes, another hot pic of you.

Oddly enough, I've not read any of these stories. I should, as I really dig your writing, but I tend to dislike written BDSM erotica due to suspension of disbelief issues. Maybe I'll break my own trend and give your stuff a shot.

 

[Keroin]

I LOL'ed. Literally. Okay, I smiled and snorted cheerfully, but you get the point. And, yes, another hot pic of you.

Oddly enough, I've not read any of these stories. I should, as I really dig your writing, but I tend to dislike written BDSM erotica due to suspension of disbelief issues. Maybe I'll break my own trend and give your stuff a shot.

Thanks H, always happy to bring forth a smile and/or cheerful snort.

All my BDSM stories are high fantasy and are in no means meant to present a real portrayal of "the lifestyle", so put your disbelief on a shelf and you'll enjoy them more

With this last batch, I wanted to write from the PYL's POV. So many stories are written from the pyl's POV but that territory is too familiar to me; I wanted to explore the other side. Also, it was a bit of a mini-tribute to my recent South Pacific home, (The enviro stuff mentioned in the story is all factual, BTW), with a special mention of my now-deceased friend Tauono, who I miss very much.

But blah, blah, blah. I hope you enjoy whichever story you choose to read but I do, honestly, welcome all feedback, especially the negative stuff. So please don't hold back.

p.s. glad you enjoyed the pic. That was a good day for me.

 

[DVS]

...p.s. glad you enjoyed the pic. That was a good day for me.

Any day I get to see a sexy picture of you is a good day. Well, within reason, of course. A picture may be worth a thousand words, but it doesn't take the place of the "touchy-feely", if you know what I mean.
And I think I should say that I do have a very vivid imagination. So, in case you happen to notice any unusual groping...it's just a friend.

 

[ShyGuy68]

Added to my little collection of Keroin pix.

Ditto!

 

[Keroin]

Any day I get to see a sexy picture of you is a good day. Well, within reason, of course. A picture may be worth a thousand words, but it doesn't take the place of the "touchy-feely", if you know what I mean.
And I think I should say that I do have a very vivid imagination. So, in case you happen to notice any unusual groping...it's just a friend.

Ah, so that was you! Now I feel bad about smacking that guy in the coffee shop this morning.