A Delicious Excercise

[champagne1982]

Everyone's been busy saying how to write sex scenes but I think it's time we tried to actually show what we mean.

The way this will work is the first person will come up with a theme. The next person should try to write an erotic sentence edited: not exceeding 30 words around the theme. The first responder gets to choose the next theme and so on .. ad nauseaum..


The first theme (since it's my idea) is eating cherry Jello.

 

[Guest]

Eating Cherry Jello

I took a tablespoonful, rolled it in my mouth like testes, let it dribble down my throat like cum.


19 words w/o title descriptor. Do I get to choose the next topic?

Perdita

 

[destinie21]

Everyone's been busy saying how to write sex scenes but I think it's time we tried to actually show what we mean.

The way this will work is the first person will come up with a theme. The next person should try to write an erotic sentence of 10 to 15 words around the theme. The first responder gets to choose the next theme and so on .. ad nauseaum..


The first theme (since it's my idea) is eating cherry Jello.

17 words.
Cherry Jello would always remind me of her most intimate parts. The taste alone made me reminiscent.

10- 15 words seems a bit short to explore a sex scene doesn't it?
Or maybe I'm just to wordy
I tried anyway

 

[Jenny _S]

Re: Re: A Delicious Excercise

17 words.
Cherry Jello would always remind me of her most intimate parts. The taste alone made me reminiscent.

The Jello melted on my tongue and ran down on my breasts to be caught by your waiting mouth.

 

[champagne1982]

Re: Re: A Delicious Excercise

The Jello melted on my tongue and ran down on my breasts to be caught by your waiting mouth.

MMMmelting Jello

17 words.
Cherry Jello would always remind me of her most intimate parts. The taste alone made me reminiscent.

10- 15 words seems a bit short to explore a sex scene doesn't it?
Or maybe I'm just to wordy
I tried anyway

Destinie.. You're right! 15 may be too restrictive. How about 30? Don't forget it's not an entire scene that's asked for. Just a single sensuous sentence. God! I love alliteration.

Eating Cherry Jello

I took a tablespoonful, rolled it in my mouth like testes, let it dribble down my throat like cum.


19 words w/o title descriptor. Do I get to choose the next topic?

Yes Ms. purr, you do.

 

[Guest]

Thanks, Mz. Champagne. Next:

Sucking on a Jelly Bean

 

[champagne1982]

Sucking on a jelly bean

He watched her suck the candy between her pretty puckered lips and his groin tightened when she showed it nestled on her delicious tongue. --- 24 words

Edited to add: I defer the theme decision to the next poster. I've already had a turn.

 

[Wantonica]

Thanks, Mz. Champagne. Next:

Sucking on a Jelly Bean

Rolling the bean full of jelly around in my tongue, little nub of a thing. The flavor invades my buds, licking through the coating produces juiciness. Sweet, delicious, delectable taste.

 

[ffreak]

He gently coaxed the jelly bean from between her lips, the pungent musk of her juices mixed with the sugary sweet bite.

(22 words)

chocolate kiss

 

[Icingsugar]

I'm in awe. Please go on.

 

[Guest]

Chocolate Kisses

Tracing delicately, my tongue sought out the last remnants of chocolate on his lips before diving into his mouth to melt into his chocolate kiss.

*sad because my husband doesn't like chocolate*

New Theme: In the dark.

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Fun exercise, Champagne!

 

[Guest]

In the Dark

He said my cunt glistened in the moonlight and he could hardly bear lapping up the dew but he did and then my eyes were glistening.

 

[Guest]

 

[Icingsugar]

In the dark:

What need did we have to see? We were no longer human. Only skin, sweat, touch, taste, smell, cock, cunt and raw, primal, orgasmic instincts.

25 words. A bit long perhaps.

 

[destinie21]

The darkness did nothing to hide her identity. He knew her with his fingertips.

the next theme

ice cream

 

[Icingsugar]

the next theme

ice cream

Lets see...

The melted pink sauce dripped from her chin into the alluring valley between her pushed up tits. I did what any man would. Any man who dared, that is.

 

[gauchecritic]

With a mouthful of icy vanilla, he leaned forward and took a more-than mouthful of her upturned breast, soaking her shirt and freeze screaming, her puckered penny-weight nipple.

Gauche

 

[Guest]

He scooped my mango gelato in his tongue then ducked under the table and fed it to my pussy while Marco watched from the kitchen.

 

[ffreak]

The ice cream dripped onto her naked breast, rivulets of vanilla flowing over her chocolate breast, caressing her dark nipple.

(20 - yay!)

next subject: rain

 

[TheEarl]

He watched her, rain coursing down his naked body, his eyes fixed on the dark shadow of her nipple through her shirt.

22 words?

The Earl

 

[Chicklet]

Firm strikes of fat drops on bare flesh like miniature stings of your strict flogger; mercilessly caressing.

17 words

His hot hands flicked my hard nipples as the rain coursed down the curves of my naked body.

18 words


maybe not as good as the others, but i'm trying!

 

[Guest]

Rain, rain, cum this way..

The scented air filled my lungs as I gasped in delilght, his rain-slickened fingers trailing up my thighs, unleashing my internal storm.

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[gauchecritic]

Thundering, obscuring, through my chest. Rivulets coursing down shoulders, spine and buttocks. Hard, driven, crashing, splashing, plashing, slowly drying. My orgasm subsiding, leaving sweet scent like dew soaked grass.

Gauche

Next: Hair.

Edited to ask: Didn't the limit go up to 30?

 

[ffreak]

We traded. I shaved the rest of the hair off my head so she could rub, while I tasted the baby soft skin around her lovely bare pussy.

(28)

 

[Guest]

Queue

He twisted my long, wavy hair around his wrist and pulled, arching my back as he thrust into my eager passage.

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