A bro/sis story idea for good detailed story writer's

sexyfem18

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Hi :kiss::) I am looking for people who love to right very detailed story's, who uses other people's ideas and makes them a reality.?

Well I like very detailed story's which involve alot of detail about almost everything.

So if this is you, and then this is my idea for a story:


Older brother has had a big night and is sleeping very soundly and forgets that he has to give his younger sister a ride to school. He has been giving her a ride to school, because their parents have been workong longer hours. He usually gives her a lift and drops her off on the way to college classes. But today, you had no classes and you forgot about her so that previous night you went to a party.
Younger sister wakes up a little later than usual and then relises she might be a bit late, so she rushes off to the shower. As she finishes the shower she relises, her older brother isn't up yet so she goes to his door to get him up, by calling out to him. How did her parents get him up every morning, when they used to be home at this time? she thought to herself.


She glances down the hallway at the grandfather clock. They were going to be a bit late. She can't wake him so she trys the door and to her surprise it is open. She sees him under the sheets on his back, so she goes over and trys to wake him, but he's like dead to the world.

In frustration she grabs the bedspread and sheets and flings them back. Then she gets a surprise while waking her sleeping brother. Suddenly a small cry of surprise escapes her my mouth and her hand flew up to try to stop it. Her older brother was nude!

She didn't know what to do. She found herself frozen to the spot, her eyes fixed on her brothers genitals.

Her eyes were open wide and her jaw was open at the sight of his cock. She remembered seeing her bf's hard dick for the 1st time, and was surprised. But she was in shock now. Because you were his size, when erect and you weren't even hard.

She wanted to put the covers over him and leave the room, but she found her gaze returning to his crotch. It'd been a long time since she'd seen her brother naked. Back when they were little they'd often bathe together. But that was a long time ago.

A look of doubt came across my face. She thinks to herself I wonder how big does this thing get.

She'd never seen one his size and even is nuts were so big and she suddenly wondered if he'd come more than other guys. She suddenly wanted to touch it and the nuts, to paddle them gently and heft them to see how much semen they contained, and how big it grew.

She silently admonished herself. That's gross! She thought. That's your brother! She tightened the towel around her perky tits. So what? A voice said from the back of her mind. It's still a cock and balls, just like other guys'. You're just curious, what harm could it do? Again she bit her lip, torn between her curiosity and her morality.

She instantly acted upon a decision and slowly reached down.


I like her to get caught finally sucking him and get very embarrased, and she starts to cry a little and she runs off to her room. He decides he really needs to have her, and explore her body, so he decides to go comfort her and encourage her that it's ok, and convince her to continue, exploring.

I like to hear details from each person's point of view in the story.

:) Any questions you'd like to ask me pls don't hesitate to ask me.

So pls email me and let me know if you will right this story.

My address is at hotmail.com under sexyfem18

I look forward to replies very soon.
 
bisexplicit said:
Why not just write the story yourself?

jitters, she is so excited by the events, but only want to read about it. Plausable deniability, I'm guessing. She would just die if anyone found out that she wrote the story herself.

Fishing for details:

Was his cock flopped down over his balls or up over his lap? :rolleyes:
 
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I wish I was more imaginative to write a very detailed story with the details I have given but sorry I'm kind of lacking in that department, thats why I'm searching for some one to take my details and turn it into a fantastic story. Lots of ideas but not the creativity to create a good story.
 
Story seems viable!

Mmmh did you ever get round to writing more or would you just like someone to help finish it? If the latter then I'd be happy to help. Story seems intersting so far and who knows it could be a hit! Just mail me!
 
Change of Venue

OK interesting theme, but I'd switch the location to a camping holiday where a brother and sister are sharing a tent with their parents tent only a few yards away, after the initial contact the story could unfold throught the camping trip, with the parents unaware of what is going on.
 
My opinion is take time to build up the mood, dont just rush into the sexual encounter. Makes it all the more exciting
 
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