A Blue Million Miles

[wilderness]

alexander,

This was beautifully written. The dialogue was original and funny. Sex is the same basic physical act, but you made it personal to the characters, that made it erotic. The location and individual's personalities make this an excellent adventure. Great characterizations and interesting character names. The ending poignant.

http://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=8335&page=2

 

[alexander tzara]

Thanks for that, Wilderness. I'm glad you liked the story.

 

[Isabella Thorne]

I can see for miles and miles and miles ...

.... a blue million miles ...

Wonderful writing, Alex!

I like that it is written in the first person - and as a male persona ...

I enjoyed it very much.
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I know that you have
'cause there's magic in my eyes.

 

[alexander tzara]

Thanks, Bella. Rachel says thanks, too. LOL Here's the song the title comes from - 'Her Eyes Are A Blue Million Miles' from the album 'Clear Spot' by Captain Beefheart:

I look at her and she looks at me
And in her eyes I see the sea
I can't see what she sees in a man like me
Her eyes, her eyes,
her eyes are a blue million miles

As far as I can see, she loves me
Her eyes, her eyes,
yeah, her eyes are a blue million miles