7:15 Train

[scoperella]

Hi everyone.

I'm the author of "7:15 Train". It was my first story, and any & all feedback would be greatly appreciated! What you liked, what you hated, anything at all. Eiher reply to this or email me at scoperella@literotica.org
Thanks a lot!!

 

[Merelan]

I saw your request and popped over and read the story. It tells me one thing about you, you are a hopeless romantic aren't you? That's great! We need more romance in our lives.
For what it's worth I thought it was a good story. Well developed, the love scene in bedroom short, but loving and that's always welcome.
Would be interested in hearing how the next couple days go with them. Is there more?

 

[scoperella]

Yes, I am quite a hopeless romantic. =)
I know the bedroom scene was short, but I didn't want to drag it out either ... too much detail sometimes ruins the romantic atmosphere, in my opinion.
Is there more? I don't know! If there seems to be an interest for more, then yes.

 

[poohlive]

I liked it, it was interesting, and different from some of the other sotries I have read here. Have you ever thought about writing something for actual publishing, would love to read some of it.