50 threads and more.

[daciasdesire]

Lilguy was the writter who wrote the magic number 50 thread for my story. I'm working on something a bit special in return for this milestone. I'm thinking at this stage it will added to one of his stories i havent written in yet. I also stole a bit of an idea from niceguy2002tim where he put the date of his last update in the subtitle to the story so that it can be seen as you browse through the stories. I have written a thread in return for this pilfering which i hope will be compensation. I've also added a thread to a story called Confessions by a writter called Avalon in return for one in mine (i think i've said this before). Also ive added three more threads to mine to take the grand total to 53 with at least five more im looking to add to it. I like having two options for the reader to select from at each branch. Plus im badly in debt to lilguy who has added 7 threds to my 2 in return. I have no idea where ill come up with that many but i may surprise him by adding them all at once soemtime. Also im almost at 3000 views. Drop me a line if your the 3000th. anyway till next time

Cheers

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

Oops that was meant to go with all my other posts and not start a new column. Sorry!!!

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

Yeah i just moved from virgin to experienced as a poster.

Aren't I a slut!

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=780

better include a link in this new column while i think about it.

Ok im really going this time.

Dacia

(Dacia leaves the room and goes to watch tele)

 

[daciasdesire]

What the f...?

I come back after about 5 hours and i have over 370 view and this topic has only been going for around 6 hours. How the f... did that happen?


Dacia

 

[lilguy]

you dont have to. Dont get me wrong if you want to it would Rule

But if it helps.I have stories under the the name Fethishboy. There a Buffy story I need help on

 

[Zingiber]

Caller #2992

"Sorry, you're caller #2992. Click!"

I checked, but I didn't make it. Some other lucky person will win the Korn ticket.

(unless viewing other pages counts?)

-- Zingiber

 

[daciasdesire]

Looks like the mystery number 3000 has gone unknown. Someone between Zingiber at number 2992 and when i got up at 3002 is the all the clues i have. Zingiber in the mean time has added a fantastic thread which sees the main character and Katherine at the dance after previously walking in on Katherines sister semi naked. Also Zingiber introduces the schools attractive media teacher for the very first time. I think i mentioned her in the introductory thread. Excellent to see someone pick that little bit of info up.

In the meantime i have had four threads waiting approval. Two have been approved by lilguy (Chyoos MVP??? what does everyone else think?) on his TV lover story. One was about the WWE and the other was a thread relating to Dawn from the Buffy TV show (Ive always found her pretty sexy). Just have to wait for the other two know. Anyway back to writting for me. Seeyas all and huge thanks to Zingiber for his thread. Zingiber becomes the eighth person to contibute (Oh and whats a hangdog gaze???).

Cheers

Dacia

 

[Zingiber]

Hangdog gaze

Hm... a "hangdog" expression would be one of embarrassment and discouragement. Dictionary.com says:

hang·dog
adj.
1. Shamefaced or guilty.
2. Downcast; intimidated.

And if you cast your gaze down from shame, you can end up looking at the "wrong" thing.

-Z.

 

[daciasdesire]

Cool thanks for the clarifacation. I hadn't heard the expression before but you seemed to know how to use the word that i wasnt worried about approving it.

Thanks

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

You cant stop progress

Two new threads added today. Lilguy has added one to continue the arc involving Carrie the skater chick. That thread takes that branch to 8 deep. I also added a thread allong the main path where the charcter gives Katherine some oral in return. That thread make four 9 deep threads in the major passage. Anyway keep reading.

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

60 Threads written

Dear all

Just added the sixtyith thread to my story. A nice long one which see the addition of my very first 10 deep thread. It sees our charcter and Rebecca under to moonlite sky about to make love for Rebeccas very first time. I hope it can remind you all of your first as it does mine. A number 11 thread should see Rebecca made into a women sometime soon, perhaps written by me or one of you. Until then keep reading and writting.

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

Oh and 30 away from 3 and a half thousand viewers. Who will it be? Zingiber can close to number 3000 and just missed out.

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

Two new threads added to my story over night. Zingiber has added a second to Choices. This one has The Charcter and Katherine getting stopped by a female police officer on "The Estate". Very ominous. The cop also makes mention of a mysterious Mr Carthan. Plenty of room for twists and turns here.

The second thread was by Goldfinger who was also adding thier second threat to my story. In this one The Character and Katherine get down to it and are photographed by Rebecca with the threat of "I cant wait to get these devolped. Wait 'til they're passed around school". Very interest in how that will work out.

In the mean time I've added two threads to lilguys TV Lover story. Just waiting for the seconds decision on approval. I'm slowly trying to get even with the amount he has contributed to me. Lilguy has been working on a series of threads that are focusing on the character of Carrie. A skater-punk kind of girl. Its nice to have someone work on a charcter not of my own design. Hes run with his ideas on her and i have checked with him on what he thinks she would do in the thread i wrote on her. I have more to add to other peoples stories so please be patient everyone

Til then

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

Progress

Dear All

Ive added two new threads to my story tonight. Both of which deal with what can be found if you go snooping through people underware draws. If all goes well there should be a link to the thread before the two new additions below

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/index.php?dx=r&story_id=780&next_id=6242

Yes, did it work????

Anyway in one you discover Carla's affair with a teacher and the other you get to introduce Katherine to a vibrator. Have a read.


I'd love to do a thread map like some ive seen lately but it would be a bit tough.

Thread Depth Number

1 1
2 2
3 4
4 8
5 16
6 14
7 8
8 5
9 4
10 1

I like to add more to the start of the story than the end as you can see. I get a bit bored writting continuous threads so i love going back and branching out.

Til next time everyones been a bit quiet as of late so lets get the forums churning along with new posts.

Cheers

Dacia

 

[goldfinger]

Hi Dacias. i posted to your story sometime ago. The site won't let me e-mail you so excuse me contacting you this way. I have enjoyed your story but what i want to do is specifically invite you to write a thread for mine What Lucy did on holiday. I like your writting and would appreciate a contribution. so what do you think?

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=866

Heres fingers crossed.

 

[daciasdesire]

Just what i was doing Goldfinger. I was reading through What Lucy... right now and just wondering where to add something. I've recieved two terrific threads from you and am eager to repay the favor. So expect something in an hour or two. (Im not a real quick typer).

Cheers

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

Ive written another one in the series on what's in Carla's draws. Find the link two threads above to be taken to around the start of this sub theme.

Cheers
Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

3 days of Updates to Choices in a row. I'm been adding to the Go to Korn Concert choice off the intro around the 6 deep mark. Today was the 60th thread i've written for Chyoo in total, not just for my own story. Im waiting for 2 to be approved by other people at th moment. One i think i may have to wait a couple of months as the writter is very infrequent with updates to thier story. Choices is still growing with a total of 66 threads added now. Still ten deep which mean lots of paths for the reader to follow and find something they like. My next milestone while be the 75th thread in the not to distance future i hope. Todays addition was a hard fuck in a motel with the character Fiona. Shes quite a wild one. I'm starting to write threads with sex now as i feel more confedient with my writting. I'll add again to day if i can think of something good so till next time keep reading.

Cheers

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

Plenty Busy

Dear All

I've had a fantastic couple of days for recieving threads. 4 contributed in 2 days. I've got two from a past contributer niceguy2002tim. Tim has introduced a new character by the name of Sarah Banks to the story. Looks like a girl that knows what she wants and make sure she gets it. I always like to read other people characters get introduced to the story. You can find his additions here.

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/index.php?dx=r&story_id=780&next_id=7349

This leads straight to his first addition and the second follows from here also.

I also recieved another from lilguy that truely heats up the Carrie branches. This is the fifth in a row from lilguy that follows Carries and the main character.

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/index.php?dx=r&story_id=780&next_id=7331

Heres the link. I also have almost two written that i just need to add. They will be on the branch i wrote earlier involving an altercation with Kelly and Carrie.

Lastly i recieved a quite large and very well thought out thread from Zingiber. He provides an alternate to how does Kelly like to go at it with a voyeuritic surprise thrown in. Can wait to see what that involves. Here the link and you need to pick the second option at the end.

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/index.php?dx=r&story_id=780&next_id=6732

Also something i thought was realy sool was that Zingiber gave a reason for finding the ticket.

Anyway im getting long so ill catch you all soon

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

Two from Two

Another two days and i have recieved two more threads. I saud a while ago that i was looking forward to my 75th but i didnt imagine i would be so close so soon. 74 currently and just one more to go.

I recieved another excellent thread from niceguy2002tim who has been incredible busy lately. His character Sarah Banks fulfills her needs with the main character. This is Tim's third in a row. I added back to his story and are just await hi judgement. The link for this thread is

Right here

I hope that worded in im going to look real stupid.

My second thread was by the fast growing Ooohkitty. This is her very first thread to me and damn fine to read. Miss Kitty is also the ninth person to add to Choices. Her thread introduces the Trumpet player from the jazz bar the character and Rebecca go to after the dance. Your can reach it

From this very spot

Can you tell Ive been reading the discussion on linking.

I have added a thread to Ooohkittys story which is awaiting her gaze. I was really please to have written that one as i think it one of the best couple Ive written and its cured the touch of writters block I was having.

Anyway thanks once again to my writters and I'm looking forward to my No 75 thread.

Cheers

Dacia

 

[daciasdesire]

Ooops

i just notice a big mistake in the submission two above this one. It said I got 40 threads in 2 days. I wish! Ive changed it to say 4 in 2 days. So sorry if i miss lead anyone!!!

Dacia

 

[niceguy2002tim]

thread map...

Hey,
I was just curious how you made that thread map. Did you go through every single path in the story and write it down as you went? I tried that with my story, A College Girl to be... and I got exhausted by the time I finished finding out how many possible page 5's there was. Here is mine so far.

1. 1
2. 3
3. 6
4. 12
5. 17


Like I said I got tired of going through the pages. Is there an easier way? One time I tried to draw out a map and there is no piece of paper in the world big enough, lol. just for page 5, there is 17 of them!

So let me know what you think.

-Tim(niceguy2002tim)

 

[daciasdesire]

Number of Threads

The way i worked out the diagram for the number of threads at each depth is I have been drawing a map of threads since the story had about 12 in total. So it was easy to read down my picture and count each link up. Like you said it would be a bugger to start with a big story. I just update it with every new thread i get. Plus i only have two choice options which helps.

Dacia