fukensploogin
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Let's try this one again.
Tommy: 24 years old, 5'10", curly brown hair and brown eyes, tan and athletic, about 170 lbs. His girlfriend recently moved out, and he now lives alone in a little box of an apartment above a seedy bar. He's a musician, but he pays the bills making coffee drinks at a funky San Francisco neighborhood coffeeshop, near the Haight. Lots of gutterpunks, yuppies, old hippies still all tripped out, musicians, artists, writers, students, bohemians, etc.
Tommy was starting to hate his job. The same old commuters, same crazy beggars harrassing him, same stupid punks who think they're cool but they're just like everyone else...
Then, on a Tuesday morning, she walked in. Natural style, ease of movement, somehow zen. Tommy had never seen her before. It had been her smile that initially cemented her in his mind and made him remember her name (as he had asked for it when she ordered her latte): Amy. That smile had been equal parts shy and lustful. Maybe he was just making shit up, but he had seen her eyes, too, and they betrayed her, as they locked eyes a few times while he was making drinks, pulling espresso shots, steaming milk.
She came in the next day, and smiled gleefully when he greeted her by name. This time they were chatting while he was making her drink.
Tommy was starting to like his job again.
The next day she came by just as he was about to take his half-hour break for lunch.
Amy is 21 years old and is a musician like Tommy, a singer-songwriter-guitarist. She is a West Coaster going to school in Boston, and is in town on her spring break.
3,101 Miles is the distance, via automobile, from San Francisco to Boston.
Tommy: 24 years old, 5'10", curly brown hair and brown eyes, tan and athletic, about 170 lbs. His girlfriend recently moved out, and he now lives alone in a little box of an apartment above a seedy bar. He's a musician, but he pays the bills making coffee drinks at a funky San Francisco neighborhood coffeeshop, near the Haight. Lots of gutterpunks, yuppies, old hippies still all tripped out, musicians, artists, writers, students, bohemians, etc.
Tommy was starting to hate his job. The same old commuters, same crazy beggars harrassing him, same stupid punks who think they're cool but they're just like everyone else...
Then, on a Tuesday morning, she walked in. Natural style, ease of movement, somehow zen. Tommy had never seen her before. It had been her smile that initially cemented her in his mind and made him remember her name (as he had asked for it when she ordered her latte): Amy. That smile had been equal parts shy and lustful. Maybe he was just making shit up, but he had seen her eyes, too, and they betrayed her, as they locked eyes a few times while he was making drinks, pulling espresso shots, steaming milk.
She came in the next day, and smiled gleefully when he greeted her by name. This time they were chatting while he was making her drink.
Tommy was starting to like his job again.
The next day she came by just as he was about to take his half-hour break for lunch.
Amy is 21 years old and is a musician like Tommy, a singer-songwriter-guitarist. She is a West Coaster going to school in Boston, and is in town on her spring break.
3,101 Miles is the distance, via automobile, from San Francisco to Boston.