I've posted my second story and so far have had positive feedback.
However any comments would be much appreciated as it is only my 2nd erotic story I have written. I'm still on that never ending learning curve!
thanks
I had planned to go after doing only one feedback today (which I have already finished) but then I clicked on your thread and your sig delighted me so much that I had to see what the story was about. I'm glad I did.
If that was only the second erotic story you've written, I am deeply envious. It was great. I was totally pulled into it and my eyes were almost stumbling over themselves to read it. Very hot.
Enjoyed it a lot and now have to go and read the first one. Ohhh... and please do write more.
I've found I am really loving getting back into writing. These are the first erotic stories I've written and I've just started a third!
The bug has bitten! LOL