tastethewine
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- Mar 30, 2024
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The one Volunteer Editor that was nice enough to give me some time. I thoroughly appreciated her taking the time. Her main response seemed to be that this was for a 'sophisticated' reader. So I think I need to find a reader/editor sophisticated enough to tell me how this piece could be improved, beyond where to put commas, I mean. Or tell me it is hopeless nonsense. Everyone's has a busy life, I know, and reading is labor intensive, I know. Does anyone rise to the bait here? The story is about bondage, singularly. It is heterosexual. There is an orgasm.
