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[Alex_Lockheed]

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[sr71plt]

Have you found an editor yet? If not I could do this one on a one-time basis assuming it doesn't go much above that 8,000 words and that you can provide it as a Word attachment and can work with Word Tracking Change. If interested, PM me and I'll send you an address to e-mail attach it to.

I have written a bit in that genre and have professionally edited both American and British style. I wouldn't mess with the British style other than that the quoting should be in American style (as it is with the story you cited). Not only is British quotation too convoluted from me to fully understand, but stories often get rejected at Literotica for not being in American quotation style.

 

[sr71plt]

The OP doesn't use Word and I no longer edit anything but Word (which is industry standard--manual editing takes twice as long as Word Tracking Change does), so afraid the OP is still looking for help.

 

[Alex_Lockheed]

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