Brandnewbuddy
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Young man or woman finds it’s time to participate in a morally dubious tradition.
My first thought was that it would be a family tradition but I think it would be more interesting having it be a town tradition.
Doesn’t necessarily have to be a contemporary story, could be set in the past as well.
When our lead comes of age they’re pretty excited as there’s a tradition they’ve never been able to find out much about. They then get a crash course from their parents: in a couple months they and the other just 18 young men will sneak into the neighboring town and kidnap their women.
Our lead is horrified by this but their father and even their mom is adamant that they participate and even hit them when they keep objecting.
The night of the raid, our lead and the other guys get as close as they can by vehicle and then go in by foot. They soon find that the town isn’t just going to hand their women over and have set traps as well as have the surprisingly burly men patrol and even beat the shit out of any young men they catch.
Our lead succeeds and finds a gorgeous woman who is surprisingly happy to see him and even stays quiet when he hoists her over his shoulder, he manages to make it back to his town where everyone is happy to see him and throws a big party for him and the other guy who succeeded.
The other boys get returned in the morning, beaten and bloody but no permanent injuries while the fathers of the captured women bring huge sacks of gold to the boys as well as for the town, and kiss their daughters goodbye.
Our lead is shocked but his new “wife” is gorgeous if a little odd, and she can’t keep her hands off of him. Soon his only thoughts are about making love to her. During one of the few nights that his wife takes a long rest, he goes for a walk and sees the other woman in a mourning dress: turns out her husband died that morning. She’s not sad though as she keeps smiling at the wriggling sack she’s cradling in her arm that is shrieking…”her little ones” as she calls it.
Lead returns home to find his wife ready to make love again while she also rubs her belly and he swears he can hear shrieks coming from inside her. What has he actually gotten himself into
Essentially I wanted a take on an Innsmouth like location where a town gets riches in exchange for helping create inhuman spawn.
For a female lead, I thought it would be interesting if she actually tries to save her friend from the neighboring town by kidnapping her, herself, only to find that she unwittingly did something that the neighboring town has been waiting for for a long time. As her friend joins her in bed, she whispers how they can now make a “VERY special child” together.
My first thought was that it would be a family tradition but I think it would be more interesting having it be a town tradition.
Doesn’t necessarily have to be a contemporary story, could be set in the past as well.
When our lead comes of age they’re pretty excited as there’s a tradition they’ve never been able to find out much about. They then get a crash course from their parents: in a couple months they and the other just 18 young men will sneak into the neighboring town and kidnap their women.
Our lead is horrified by this but their father and even their mom is adamant that they participate and even hit them when they keep objecting.
The night of the raid, our lead and the other guys get as close as they can by vehicle and then go in by foot. They soon find that the town isn’t just going to hand their women over and have set traps as well as have the surprisingly burly men patrol and even beat the shit out of any young men they catch.
Our lead succeeds and finds a gorgeous woman who is surprisingly happy to see him and even stays quiet when he hoists her over his shoulder, he manages to make it back to his town where everyone is happy to see him and throws a big party for him and the other guy who succeeded.
The other boys get returned in the morning, beaten and bloody but no permanent injuries while the fathers of the captured women bring huge sacks of gold to the boys as well as for the town, and kiss their daughters goodbye.
Our lead is shocked but his new “wife” is gorgeous if a little odd, and she can’t keep her hands off of him. Soon his only thoughts are about making love to her. During one of the few nights that his wife takes a long rest, he goes for a walk and sees the other woman in a mourning dress: turns out her husband died that morning. She’s not sad though as she keeps smiling at the wriggling sack she’s cradling in her arm that is shrieking…”her little ones” as she calls it.
Lead returns home to find his wife ready to make love again while she also rubs her belly and he swears he can hear shrieks coming from inside her. What has he actually gotten himself into
Essentially I wanted a take on an Innsmouth like location where a town gets riches in exchange for helping create inhuman spawn.
For a female lead, I thought it would be interesting if she actually tries to save her friend from the neighboring town by kidnapping her, herself, only to find that she unwittingly did something that the neighboring town has been waiting for for a long time. As her friend joins her in bed, she whispers how they can now make a “VERY special child” together.