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[Brown_Eyez]

I am new here, and thought I'd post some of my poems. I am just going to post this one for now. I am assuming it is okay to start a new thread to do this. If not, please let me know.


Рαяαdĩşε

Hold me, hug me, kiss me
Whisper naughty words in my ear
Safe in your arms
never will I fear.

Your breath caresses my flesh
so enticing with each lick, each kiss
your teasing me sets me up
for a trip into pure bliss.

The warmth of your body,
a finger tracing my breast
Together in our secret place
separating us from the rest.

I wrap my legs around you
and I slowly take you in
I want your body's sweat
to mark my sin.

Your scent intoxicates me
You thrust in and out with ease
I writhe my hips against you
to give you a little tease.

You deafen me with your moans
as we feed relentless desire
we finally release our passions
as we are consumed in our fire.

 

[WickedEve]

Sure you can start a thread for your poems.
Looking for feedback?
Just sharing?
Got anything non-erotic?

 

[Angeline]

I am new here, and thought I'd post some of my poems. I am just going to post this one for now. I am assuming it is okay to start a new thread to do this. If not, please let me know.


Рαяαdĩşε

Hold me, hug me, kiss me
Whisper naughty words in my ear
Safe in your arms
never will I fear.

Your breath caresses my flesh
so enticing with each lick, each kiss
your teasing me sets me up
for a trip into pure bliss.

The warmth of your body,
a finger tracing my breast
Together in our secret place
separating us from the rest.

I wrap my legs around you
and I slowly take you in
I want your body's sweat
to mark my sin.

Your scent intoxicates me
You thrust in and out with ease
I writhe my hips against you
to give you a little tease.

You deafen me with your moans
as we feed relentless desire
we finally release our passions
as we are consumed in our fire.

It's absolutely fine! Welcome to the poetry forum. If you want feedback on your poems, just say so. Feel free to join in any of the threads here.

 

[Brown_Eyez]

It's absolutely fine! Welcome to the poetry forum. If you want feedback on your poems, just say so. Feel free to join in any of the threads here.

Thanks Angeline! I don't mind feedback, good or bad, I'll take it. After I posted this I notice the Poetry Discussion Circle. So there for a bit, I was thinking I posted it in the wrong place!

 

[Liar]

Hi Brown and welcome.

If you don't mind, I have a question:

ĩş thεяε α şpεcĩαl яεαşon foя thε titlε to look lĩke thĩş?

Just curious.

 

[Brown_Eyez]

Sure you can start a thread for your poems.
Looking for feedback?
Just sharing?
Got anything non-erotic?

Hi Wicked! I'm sorry I didn't see your response earlier. Yeah, I have lots of non-erotic. I will post one soon.

Hi Brown and welcome.

If you don't mind, I have a question:

ĩş thεяε α şpεcĩαl яεαşon foя thε titlε to look lĩke thĩş?

Just curious.

Hi Liar! Yes, but a quite simple reason. I just want the title to stand out...just to be different. That's all.

 

[TMV]

No..., nobody here would want you to just share.

I am new here, and thought I'd post some of my poems. I am just going to post this one for now. I am assuming it is okay to start a new thread to do this. If not, please let me know.


Рαяαdĩşε

Hold me, hug me, kiss me
Whisper naughty words in my ear
Safe in your arms
never will I fear.

Your breath caresses my flesh
so enticing with each lick, each kiss
your teasing me sets me up
for a trip into pure bliss.

The warmth of your body,
a finger tracing my breast
Together in our secret place
separating us from the rest.

I wrap my legs around you
and I slowly take you in
I want your body's sweat
to mark my sin.

Your scent intoxicates me
You thrust in and out with ease
I writhe my hips against you
to give you a little tease.

You deafen me with your moans
as we feed relentless desire
we finally release our passions
as we are consumed in our fire.

Oh yeah.............., that's hot and beautiful. Thanx for posting it .

 

[Brown_Eyez]

Oh yeah.............., that's hot and beautiful. Thanx for posting it .

Thank you.

 

[WickedEve]

Hi Wicked! I'm sorry I didn't see your response earlier. Yeah, I have lots of non-erotic. I will post one soon.



Hi Liar! Yes, but a quite simple reason. I just want the title to stand out...just to be different. That's all.

I like the way the title looks.
And I would like to see some non-erotic poetry. I think it tells me a lot more about a poet.

 

[Brown_Eyez]

I like the way the title looks.
And I would like to see some non-erotic poetry. I think it tells me a lot more about a poet.

I just posted one called "It's the way". Hopefully you can gather your opinion from that!