Mind Control Incest???

I have been toying with the idea of writing a story about some type of mind control. Not the normal, boring hypnotism, but something more daring.
I came up with an idea, but the best way I can see for it to work is if the 2 main characters were Fraternal twins, one male and one female.
I only have the outline right now. I really think I can make the story work.
And, if I can, should I post it under Incest or MC?

Any thoughts on this?
Suggestions?
Thanks,
MF

id put it under incest.... i know how hard a decision like that is though... a story with 2 or more catagories and you can only pick one..... decisions decisions

go on. I like your ideas

Thats the best idead. i would like to read it as soon as you post it. if they both are virgin then it will make it best than ever.

His or mine?

N8Dreams said:

go on. I like your ideas

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Did you mean MY ideas for this story?
I've had some stuff to do lately and didn't get back to this until tonight.

I don't want to give away ALL my ideas and plans for the story, but here is the premise, sorta:
I wanted to write a mind control story, but not the boring hypno type. It HAS to be different! So, I imagined an event that would give someone special powers of the mind and/or body in sexual matters. Something like the movie "What Women Want", where he would know when women are interested in him, and what they want him to do, etc. But wait, there's more...

What if they were fraternal twins, male and female, about 18 or so? And they were on a ferris wheel or something similar, (Hey, I can make it work in the midwest farming areas), and lightning struck them during an intense solar flair time, such as we have had recently here? If it can bring the Northern Lights down into the continental states, then it can cause other strong things to happen also.

Now it gets special - Due to their twin status, and their closeness at the event time, they now develop some special physical (Sexual) traits and desires, which they discover by talking to each other and being aware, etc.

Then they don't feel when someone likes THEM or wants THEM to do something, but, rather, they feel what others feel for their TWIN! So, they have to discover that they want each other of course, and have to help each other reach their sexual heights with those interested in the other one.

OK, NOW, any more thoughts? Is this workable? I get excited thinking about it! I do plan on writing this, so I hope no one steals the idea and beats me to it.
Thanks for your feedback,
MF

handlebars69 said:

id put it under incest.... i know how hard a decision like that is though... a story with 2 or more catagories and you can only pick one..... decisions decisions

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I agree...Definitely it would be under incest.

OK, Incest

Lovelynice said:

I agree...Definitely it would be under incest.

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I tend to agree with that too. That sounds like the best place.
But how does it sound to you? Will it work?
Thanks.

To me, I think the story idea is pretty good given it's under incest. They often fall into generic 'let's fuck!' stories that fail to hold the reader's attention (unless the reader is looking for a quickie, but that's aside the point).

Therefore, the problem you face is keeping the story's head above water. First, what kind of mind ontrol are you thinking? I applaud your decision to stay away from hypnosis (too cliche). Does a twin sudenly realize they can hear the other's thoughts, or can they manipulate their thoughts by thinking it themselves? Are they telekinetic?

Once you've figured that out, how does it evolve into eroticism? How do the little tidbits unfold into gratifying sex?

Personally, I think that one sibling waking up to their potential start testing their newfound power's limits. The person experiments in all sorts of little ways, until testing a direction that puts them together.

Just my angle.

Not really mind CONTROL

flawed_ethics said:

To me, I think the story idea is pretty good given it's under incest. They often fall into generic 'let's fuck!' stories that fail to hold the reader's attention (unless the reader is looking for a quickie, but that's aside the point).

Therefore, the problem you face is keeping the story's head above water. First, what kind of mind ontrol are you thinking? I applaud your decision to stay away from hypnosis (too cliche). Does a twin sudenly realize they can hear the other's thoughts, or can they manipulate their thoughts by thinking it themselves? Are they telekinetic?

Once you've figured that out, how does it evolve into eroticism? How do the little tidbits unfold into gratifying sex?

Personally, I think that one sibling waking up to their potential start testing their newfound power's limits. The person experiments in all sorts of little ways, until testing a direction that puts them together.

Just my angle.

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If you read my ideas above, you see that they gain the power to read other people's minds and those peoples thoughts about desires with their twin, but not themselves!
I believe the name for this is like an empath, a specialized one?

So, first, they realize their twin has desires for Themselves. Then, they realize each other is feeling the same thoughts from the other. See, Melania feels that sam likes her and wants her, and Sam feels that Melanie wants him. Then after their wants become more obvious, since they don't KNOW that the other can feel their thoughts too, they talk about it, and in their desire to please each other, do what the other one wants.
"Your wish is my desire" kind of thing.

So after exploring each other, they find that other people are interested sexually in their twin. Now, they can talk to each other about it, and tell the other one when someone wants the other one. Of course, they have to be in close proximity for this to work out, where Melanie, for instance, can tell Sam that Buffy wants his bod, then give him detailed signals as to what exactly she wants him to do to her. She relays the thoughts as he blows his date's mind by giving her wild sex to fulfill her every fantasy.
And he does the same for her and her dates.

And there are the physical differences since the "incident" that heighten all their sexual senses, as well as intensity, size, engorgement, wetness, touch, everything is heightened.

Of course, they love each other like only twins can, so they want only the best for each other. And they ensure that each other gets all they desire, from each other and from their friends.

So, it's not like manipulating someone elses mind, but using their mind to manipulate them!

Well, I like it.

OK, Last post

I'm disapointed that I got no replies at all. I really wanted to know if this idea sounded workable.
Your lack of replies indicate that it is either garbage, or who cares.
Maybe this was started in the wrong forum to get replies?
Anyhow, I value your opinions.
If I get no more, I'll let the thread die, but NOT the idea.
I still like it and think I can make it work.

I think you pegged it with the empath comment. Your story is not a mind control story, but more Sci Fi/Fantasy related. The interesting thing about playing with the empath relationship is feeding off each other. One thing you could add that is a little more interactive is one twin is in the other room while the other twin is boffing. The one twin can "eavesdrop" on the sex while the other is doing it. Gives you the masturbatory twist.

Empath

The_Fool said:

I think you pegged it with the empath comment. Your story is not a mind control story, but more Sci Fi/Fantasy related. The interesting thing about playing with the empath relationship is feeding off each other. One thing you could add that is a little more interactive is one twin is in the other room while the other twin is boffing. The one twin can "eavesdrop" on the sex while the other is doing it. Gives you the masturbatory twist.

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I think I was intrigued by that idea from watching Charmed.
Wish I could read AM's mind sometime

It definately seems to be more suited to Incest category, in my mind.
I envision that they must be in close proximity to each other to "Feel" what people are feeling about their twin. Of course, they discover it with just the two of them first, so they act on those feelings, of course.

Then, involving other people, who they discover through their twin "Feeling" the 3rd person's thoughts, I DO see the twin being close-by, so yes, next-room, or even same room later has crossed my mind.

And, yes, Masturbation will take place first, between the twins, and later, in many varied ways!

Thanks for your input. I appreciate it!
Just have got to start writing this thing and see what happens, and hope others are as excited as I am about it. LOL

It is released

I finished and released it. Yes, Mel will get hers too.
Thanks for the nice feedback. There will be a part II when I get the time to continue it. There will be all sorts of opportunities for the both of them and their girlfriends/boyfriends to have fun together. Two-somes, threesomes...
Hope you enjoy it.
"Summer Of Discovery"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=127105

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