A suggestion for authors seeking feedback here

openthighs_sarah

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I don't visit this forum too often, but occasionally I'll take a peek and see if anything looks interesting or if someone has a question, especially if I recognize the name.

Looking at the first page of posts right this moment, I see that 13 of 40 threads have received no replies, and 19 other threads have received less than 10 replies (including repeat posts by the original thread-starter).

I think the views and replies could be significantly higher if the thread titles and contents were more descriptive. Simply using "Looking for feedback" or "Great story" or some variant of those two titles probably won't mean much to the average poster unless they recognize your name.

I'm no authority, but I thought I would provide some suggestions for getting more responses in this forum. They're untested and completely speculative, and most likely at least half of them are wrong.

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1) If you have a question about feedback itself, or about a story you read or posted, try to include the core of the question in the title. "What's a normal vote/view ratio?" is much better than "Question about feedback."

2) If you're praising a story, include the author's name and, if possible, an indication of why it's worth anyone's time to read your post (and maybe the story). "Wicked sexy new anal story by sheath" will draw my eye much more than "Great story." Once I open the post, I want to know why it's good and I want a link to the story. Be as descriptive as you can, even if you don't think you can write too well.

3) If you're damning a story for which the author hasn't explicitly requested public feedback, do it privately if you have to do it at all. Send feedback directly to the author.

4) If you want feedback on your own story, be friendly and descriptive, even with the title. "Looking for feedback" won't attract anyone unless they're bored, they recognize your name, they're feeling altruistic, or they want to get their post counts up. The best feedback comes from people who are unbiased but excited by the subject -- so get those people to read your story. "Feedback request for short M/F/F spanking story" would be something I'd click (especially knowing it's short). Inside the post, ask a few questions you'd like to have answered about the reader's response to the story -- a lot of people won't be able to give truly descriptive feedback, but most people will be willing to answer a question or two.

5) Use a message icon if it's appropriate. They're silly but they do make a thread stand out a little, and it couldn't hurt.

6) If someone gives you public feedback, respond to them (in public or in private). People want to know you read the feedback, otherwise they won't be inclined to offer it next time.
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That's it. Use any of the above suggestions at your own risk, and good luck with your posts!


mistress of unsolicited advice,
sarah
 
Excellent advice, Sarah. If I could add one more:

If you want feedback, give feedback to others. There isn't a Feedback Fairy here who comes alive only to bestow feedback on others. This is a community and its members have to pitch in to help each other out. It's disheartening when people receive feedback and then dissappear, never to be heard from again.

On another note, giving detailed feedback forces you to read critically and take notice of things you might not have otherwise, which can improve your own writing a lot.
 
DarlingNikki said:
If you want feedback, give feedback to others.
This should actually be number one on the list, for all the reasons you stated. In the Story Discussion Circle it's a rule, I think, that you have to participate in at least two discussions before you submit your own story -- but it's an excellent principle for this forum, too.
 
Yes, it irks me more than a little that so many ask for feedback but never give it in return.

Perhaps some just don't feel capable, but really is that an excuse? I believe if you are literate enough to write a story, you are capable of giving an opinion on one.

When I first started visiting this forum a number of authors offered 'feedback for feedback'. That seemed to work quite well.

Have a great day now,

Alex. (fem)
 
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YEP!

Everyone here has hit the nail on the head, don't expect feedback if you don't participate actively in the Literotica community. And , this should go without saying, POST THE LINK TO YOUR STORY! Most of us will not go looking for it, even if you give the name and category, blah blah.

Well, off to go watch my baseball team lose. :(

Luv Always, Sexy :kiss:
 
well said

I must say I agree with everything written here so far! If I may add my own humble opinion, if you have asked for feedback and someone has taken the time to write a thorough critique of your story, don't turn around and argue about your reviewer's opinions. Take a day or two to absorb the comments, and you might find that the review was accurate. If you disagree, or don't understand the comments, pm the reviewer and ask questions.

For example, if you've been told that your story belongs in Mature instead of Erotic Couplings, ask why the reviewer thought so. You might find that, rather than being a criticism of your story, that member thought that certain elements of your story would put off people who typically read the EC category, and you might get better feedback by putting it in front of people who enjoy the Mature category.

I don't think there are many people who take the time to read stories and then write lengthy commentaries who do it to be nasty. The assumption is, if you've asked for feedback, you want ideas on the ways you can improve your writing.


Ciao,
Joolz
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Okay, I tried it. Thanks for the advise.

Openthighs Sarah,
Thanks for the good gouge. I gave it a whirl and will see how it goes. I was unable to change the subject tag but I will take on your advice in the future. It only makes good sense.

Click here to see the revised thread

v/r

USMCORDIE:rolleyes:
 
Execellent advice on feedback

Thank you all for your advice. I will take it to heart and try to offer more feedback. Keep up the good work.

- Steveinda
 
Sarah,

thanks for this thread. It is good for a novice to have places to learn. I have appreciatted the imput of all.

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