A Simple Message

alias x

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A person finds a message. Maybe they find it in a bottle at the beach. Maybe it's on a fortune cookie. Maybe it's on a note inside a box of cereal. I'm not sure exactly. Anyhow, the message states simply, "I got laid today!"

I can think of two sub-ideas for this story. The first is that the person fantasizes about the person being laid. The person contemplates several scenarios about what may have happened, many of which relate to where it was found. If left in a cereal box, did the person get laid at breakfast and then hide the message by sneaking it into the grocery store box? Did a person get laid at a factory. Was the message merely a prank? The story could have several such contemplations. This story could easily be written more than once by different authors.

The alternative sub-idea (which could also be used simultaneously) is for more and more such messages to pop up in all sorts of different places. Perhaps a prankster is getting around or perhaps there are copycats contributing. Soon, people are seeing such messages at least 2-3 times per week in various places and products. Such messages produce lots of talking between people. Many such conversations lead to talking about (or having) sex.
 
Hmmm, that would be one fortune cookie where playing the 'in bed' game doesn't really add much to it.
 
alias x said:
A person finds a message. Maybe they find it in a bottle at the beach. Maybe it's on a fortune cookie. Maybe it's on a note inside a box of cereal. I'm not sure exactly. Anyhow, the message states simply, "I got laid today!"

I can think of two sub-ideas for this story. The first is that the person fantasizes about the person being laid. The person contemplates several scenarios about what may have happened, many of which relate to where it was found. If left in a cereal box, did the person get laid at breakfast and then hide the message by sneaking it into the grocery store box? Did a person get laid at a factory. Was the message merely a prank? The story could have several such contemplations. This story could easily be written more than once by different authors.

The alternative sub-idea (which could also be used simultaneously) is for more and more such messages to pop up in all sorts of different places. Perhaps a prankster is getting around or perhaps there are copycats contributing. Soon, people are seeing such messages at least 2-3 times per week in various places and products. Such messages produce lots of talking between people. Many such conversations lead to talking about (or having) sex.
Kilroy Was Here

Yes, both sub ideas should go together as a mind control story here.
What do you think bear commercials really are?

I just had an idea!
Why not make it a spam worm that's sent to everyone in your address book and anyone else you mail from then on.
The spam links to a website that's like iFriends meets Adult Friend Finder.
This site has a browser hijacker that looks in on your surfing history (have to be careful we don't get into lolitas), creates it's own porn bookmarks, and can control your computer and the network you are connected to.
By the end of the story (gets into government computers), the hacker has made the world one big giant E-orgy! :D
 
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