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FallingToFly said:

Slow! cumbersome!
05/30/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Slow build-up to where? All these little stories - when do they tie in? Your scenes should have a low, a middle, and a high point, not necessarily in that order. Avoid the droning factor. Try making your sentences different length for variety. Perhaps more writing, less reviewing might help.


You know what... FUCK YOU.

Yes, you know exactly who you are, you pathetic little shit. I am ever so sorry that I can actually WRITE something with chapters, and your drivel is half-legible moron stroke. I am exhausted with your BULLSHIT commentary regarding my reviews- write something worthwhile and maybe it'll get decent commentary, you arrogant little methane breather.

Here's a review for you: I've glanced through everything you've posted in the last few weeks, just because you've defended it so fiercely. There's ONE halfway decent piece in there, and I'm assuming you had help with it. IF you got laid on a halfway regular basis, you'd know that there is no way in hell half the sex you write is even feasible... either that, or you're too stupid to know when a woman is faking it. General hint, if you have to pay for it, she's lying about how good you are.

Here's a news flash: I'm already published, more than once. Obviously, my writing isn't that bad if there's people begging me to move from short stories to novels, now is it? What the fuck is your problem? You can't deal with a woman who has her own opinion that doesn't fall at your feet and worship you? I don't do that for anyone, get the fuck over it.

Just stay the fuck away from me, from my submissions, and get a fucking life. You can't write, and trashing better writers is just petty jealousy and an inferiority complex running away with you. Go get some therapy, or a cat, or something. I'm more than fed up with your juvenile games and half-assed attempts at insults. There's a reason you're on ignore- take the hint already!

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Daniellekitten said:

Don't you hate it when they do that... to you...

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i read enchanted forest and think its one of the most sensuously written and highly erotic story that i have read in a long long time . thank you very much for this brilliant piece of art

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neonlyte said:

Just for a change, nothing but praise from Anonymous today, thank you all.

I'd particularly like to thank 'Anonymous' who e-mailed me... and then signed her name, I'm afraid I can't give you the information you ask.

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A Credible Story Teller
06/02/06 By: Anonymous in USA Mi
Of all the themes here, the theme of marital consequence most allows writers to become authors and authors to become Story Tellers. There is a progression and rightfully so.

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This writer became an author and with this story pushes Story Teller status because he understands the credibility process and has developed respect for his work and himself in his process. He already does most every thing right and is moving into a higher niche of appreciation by a very high percentage of all readers. He doesn't contrive or post twist to get there as he trusts his instincts since they are grounded in life's normal realities of the progression of action(s) and always resulting plus or minus consequence.

Thanks Author - your talent, diligence and standards are apparent and growing. Please let the ride continue at interval.

With Very High Regard

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neonlyte said:

Just for a change, nothing but praise from Anonymous today, thank you all.

I'd particularly like to thank 'Anonymous' who e-mailed me... and then signed her name, I'm afraid I can't give you the information you ask.

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S-Des said:

To the very nice annonymous poster who took the time to write this.



After some very interesting opinions on writing, he added,



That was almost too nice. How am I supposed to fit my head through the door?

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Daniellekitten said:

hey S-des, I hate to tell you this, but from the sound of that email, he sounds like my Mr. Anonymous who yacks on the stories that I write that have any form of female subjugation in them. He has nailed me a couple of times, so watch it, he's like a rabid dog who will turn when least expected...

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S-Des said:

Don't they all? I'm just happy to get the occasional nice one. If you look at the comments from Ch1 to Ch3 of Fool's Envy, you wouldn't believe it's the same story. Thanks for the warning, but trust me, I'm used to it. After The Fact got me more hate mail than I thought was possible (including my first death threat this week . . . followed closely by my second). HDK said it best, I really manage to stir them up.

Still, thanks to all the annonymous posters on Ch3. It was very nice to hear such good things.

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This message contains feedback for: Aurora Black
About the submission: How to Survive in a Foreign Country
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Hi, I enjoyed your article which I skimmed. I agree with most of it (I remember being in Bulgaria wearing colored clothing with light hair and being stared at). The world has changed - BUT I think the thing you missed in the unknowing - the adventure of the vacation and getting to know the people (unexpectantly)...Just a thought!

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MistressJett said:

*hugs*

I almost wrote something like yours, before I saw that you'd written it.

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MistressJett said:

PMSL. Well, mine would have been more the 'Surviving as an American in Central Europe' - including a brief bit about hat size in relation to the importance of people in authority.

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MistressJett said:

Nope. Think about it... bakers, police, passport control, train conductors... the more important they are, the bigger their hats.

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