OOC Cinderella Discussion Thread

Britwitch said:

Am assuming young Cindy will be the youngest...so will probably make her 18/19...if that's ok with everyone?
Will work on a bio shortly...after I've attacked my appartment with a mop

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That's fine with me. I'd see her as the youngest too, such the innocent.

Hey Brit that sounds great if you are the youngest i well make my girl 23 yrs. My bio well be posted in a few hours as i am on my way out the door to work. Also I wanted to wait because I would like to make our characters kind of opposites in looks but simular in personality so if i deside to be nice in the end as one of the steps sisters usaully is in this story it well be more feasable.

prissy_kytten said:

Hey Brit that sounds great if you are the youngest i well make my girl 23 yrs. My bio well be posted in a few hours as i am on my way out the door to work. Also I wanted to wait because I would like to make our characters kind of opposites in looks but simular in personality so if i deside to be nice in the end as one of the steps sisters usaully is in this story it well be more feasable.

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Sounds like a plan, will hopefully have my bio up by the time you're able to post

And yes, innocent...I think I can do innocent ...just about...

Brit you've got the right to create the sur-name for Cindy and her step-mom. I'll come up with the maiden name unless kytten, you have an idea for one. Matters not to me.

Oooh yay...
I think.... Barton ...will be a good surname.

Cinderella Barton...

Yes, me likey!

I had not really thought of it, but if it helps you come up with a sur name my first name well me Amara.

I want to express one more anal retentive thing about myself and then maybe I'll be done. (It is so hard explaining your habits to folks you don't write with.)

If a person has to leave the thread for personal reasons and they post they'll be back, we'll do our best to leave your character alone. But if you disappear without a word, a PM, an IM to me and I have to determine that you've left the thread, or you've left Lit., then I'll control your character. If I have to kill the person off I will. If I have to bring in one of my alternate SRP characters, I will.

Once I take over, the character is mine unless you come back and are willing to take off where I leave off.

I enjoy writing very much, but nothing upsets me more than getting into a story, loving every aspect of it and then the people are gone. I've continued stories with my alts, simply because I enjoy the plot and I want to see it finished. I don't know where/if/when Cinderella will be over.

Hell, there could be a chapter 2 to deal with the life after her "Happily Ever After". Who knows. I just know I get tired of loosing threads that I fall in love with.

Anal Retentive Red.

Tseranc is in as the Banker/Landlord or whatever title he uses. So we'll NPC the other step-sister, she's free to whoever needs her in their posts. I'll put up a bio for her too.

Katherine (Willingsworth) Barton and NPC: Hanna Willingsworth

Katherine (Willingsworth) Barton
43 years old
Widowed twice
Black hair
Blue eyes
5'8”

Katherine wed Cinderella's father when Cinderella was nine. Katherine's two daughters were 14 and 16. Her first marriage ended with the untimely and somewhat suspicious death of her abusive husband Michael. After Michael's death Katherine set her eyes on Cinderella's father, believing him to have a vast fortune at his fingertips. She was wrong.

Cinderella's father was a wise man, spending his money wisely and only on things he and his daughter needed. She was the apple of his eye and upon wedding Katherine, something he did because he felt his daughter needed a mother and would benefit from two sisters, Katherine saw where his true love lay. Not with her and not with the idea of bettering themselves to fill their coffers.

Katherine began an affair with the local gentleman, one wealthier than Michael. She set her sights on him and knew to wed him she'd have to become a widow again. Sadly, and for some, suspiciously, Michael Barton became ill and passed away a year after wedding Katherine.

Katherine's plan didn't work however. The man didn't want to marry her, instead he wanted her land and because Kathrine had secretly been living outside her means when Michael was away, she was very much in debt. So she struck a deal with the local fella ... when her daughters came of age they would provide for him the things that the local whores were providing, for free. He provides her with $$. She gave him the deed, though she had no right to it, everything belongs to Cinderella. Katherine's been his lover for sometime as has her two eldest daughters. Cinderella is now of age and she knows she'll be turning the girl over to him soon.

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Kaena:

Hanna Willingsworth
Age 25
5'7''
Brown Hair
Blue Eyes

She's the eldest daughter to Katherine. She's a royal bitch. Spoiled, cruel, lazy and generally an overall bad girl. She'll do whatever is necessary to make sure she gets her way and no one else, including her blood relatives and “adopted” ones do. The only person she is really scared of is her mother and yet even then she still thinks of ways to double cross her. She wouldn't mind replacing mom in her lover's bed permanently.

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Hanna during discussions was an NPC, she is not any longer. She'll be written by Kaena. ~ Thanks, Red.

Cinderella Barton
18 years old
Honey coloured hair
Brown eyes
5’2’’
Petite frame with womanly curves having developed over the last few years.

Cinderella missed her father. More than anything. She had been too young when her mother died to remember anything of her and when her father died, she was left alone. Well, she felt as if she were alone most of the time.

It wasn’t that she didn’t love her step-mother and sisters, she tried to, she tried so hard to love them and cherish them despite the way they behaved towards her, but it was hard. Even for someone as naturally good natured and optimistic as Cinderella was. (Naïve some might say.)

Now that she had come of age she hoped, more than anything, to claim a little of her inheritance and use it to travel. She longed to see the world her father had told her stories of in her childhood and, if she was honest, she longed to get out of the home that become almost a prison in recent years.

Hey Red, additional to what we won't do it would probably be a good idea to start generating where we want this to go. After all, there are vastly different ways that you can take a storyline like this. I recall submitting a cinderella story for a creative writing class where the Prince thought of Cinders as an airhead and was disinterested in anything that was going on, most notably the King and Queen trying to marry him off, until he realized what a Domme one of the so-called ugly sisters were at which time he found himself getting turned on for the first time ever. Likewise, there's a vast difference (or is that vas deferens) between the romantic standard sleeping beauty "they lived happily ever after" and the bdsm/slavery sleeping beauty of A.N. Rocqueleire (Ann Rice) trilogy.

Amara Willingsworth

Age: 23
Height: 5'8
Weight: 125
Slightly curvey, with small breast and round hips
Hair and eyes: green, and dark alburn

As the middle child, Amara was somewhat left out since her older sister was a beauty and her mother had always thought she was destine for greatness, Amara had taken the back burner, still treated better then her step sister she was not treated badly just below the stature of Hanna.

Amara was kind of quite, and booky although her mother made her into a proper lady, she hid her books when gentlemen were around and dunned a bright smile, flatering those her mother saw fit to grace with their company, Amara was not mean to Cinderella but neither was she nice to her, she was more indifferent to both her sister and her step sister, following her mothers commands like a favored pet might.

Amara secretly wanted what her sister had, but was not willing to the lengths Hanna was to get what she wanted, instead she prefered to live her life status quo, everything she needed was provided for and therefore she felt no great need to break out of her shell and live a life of her own.

BadForm said:

Hey Red, additional to what we won't do it would probably be a good idea to start generating where we want this to go. After all, there are vastly different ways that you can take a storyline like this. I recall submitting a cinderella story for a creative writing class where the Prince thought of Cinders as an airhead and was disinterested in anything that was going on, most notably the King and Queen trying to marry him off, until he realized what a Domme one of the so-called ugly sisters were at which time he found himself getting turned on for the first time ever. Likewise, there's a vast difference (or is that vas deferens) between the romantic standard sleeping beauty "they lived happily ever after" and the bdsm/slavery sleeping beauty of A.N. Rocqueleire (Ann Rice) trilogy.

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I read Ann's Beauty series . I'll leave it with that statement.

I've also written a number of Lit stories that have twisted Fairy Tales. I did Cinderella, Beauty/Beast, Rapunzal, Snow White and The Swan Princess. I've also played with some Grimms more childish tales, Red Riding Hood, Hansel/Gretel and soon Jack/Beanstalk. I do know there is no set thing about a story when writers get together to twist it back and forth.

In the end I'd like Cinderella to get her happily ever after. If she is virginal when she weds the Prince I'll be shocked. I see him falling in love with her, the sexual part of his attraction would be up to you and Brit. How much experience he has would also be up to you.

Cinderella's currently (I'm seeing her) as a virgin. She's gonna loose it. He gets it first? Probably the guy Tseranc is bringing in, but again that can be determined here if folks are against that idea.

I want her to have a happy ending, but not a happy life. I have no qualms with anything as far as a BDSM angle. I suspect it will happen with Kat and Tseranc's characters. I don't think I want the entire thread devoted to that because honestly it can get tedious and repetitive if we're all running around tying folks up to screw em.

Oh, I'm putting a link to the bios posts on the first post of the thread, for future reference.

Yep, at the moment, Cinderella is as pure as the driven snow...
How long she stays that way I'll leave up to my fellow writers...although I suspect that when the time comes, she might not be as willing as some to part with her innocence...

*SIGH* See all you miss when you have to go to a doctor's appointment halfway through a post? OK, a bio

Prince Richard of the Royal House of Ardenze
Looks: Prince Richard stands 6'5 and is built like a brick outhouse, thus leading to the nickname quietly whispered between the lady's of the court (Big Dick Ardenze, or Big Prince Dick). Richard is unaware of the nickname and might even be embarrassed by it. He is a fan of sports, pretty much all sports from hunting to wrestling, to jousting, which has given him his size and stature. His is red haird and fair skinned with deep green eyes. Any more, ask and I'll invent it.
Background: At 27, the prince is annoying his parents by not having taken a wife yet. They are forcing him to go to as many balls as possible in the hopes of him finding someone to wed and carry on his line. However the prince is tired of the simpering girls of the court. He longs for a real woman, someone who can challenge him while driving him on, someone who life won't beat down. At this point of his life he tends to bury himself in politic and sport as a way of avoiding bowing, grovelling, brainless men and women of the court not to mention his own dissatisfaction at never having found someone to love. He remains a virgin as he would rather hunt a fox or wrestle a warrior than hang around with the women of court. Oh, his more common nickname of "Prince Charming" relates to three things depending on whom it comes from. From the women who are trying to bed him, it is a bias brought on my his attractiveness. From politicians of varying kinds it refers to his charisma in political dealings. From his parents and a few others it is a sarcastic comment indicating he refusal to be with women makes him quite the opposite.

Hope this suffices.

p.s. Just checked this thread in another window as I was writing this and saw your update. No problem with anything you said, I just want to note that you don't "tie people up to screw em", you tie em up to screw their sister in front of em. Or am I sick and twisted? Actually, I have no problem with an entirely bdsm, an entirely vanilla-romantic, or an entirely suicidal-depressing thread, or a mixture of them. Hell I'll write almost anything despite my propensities in some of my threads.

BadForm you are so bad, and as for him being a virgin this could make things interesting hopefully that changes poor Cindy having to experience the unexperienced

Sir Warin Pevensey – the bad guy mentioned by Red

Taller then most, his thin build made him seem to loom over people, making most uneasy; as if he were lurking over their shoulders. With a nearly constant frown, partially hidden by his dark mustache and pointy goatee, though these as well as his neck length hair was begging to show flecks of gray.

He owns the largest private bank in the kingdom, and his low status in the peerage he owes to a grandfather who thought of money as a means to promote good deeds. Warin, by contrast sees money as a means to control people to get what he wanted.

He's bedded the lovely, and delightfully in debt Katherine Barton for quite some time, and even accepted the pleasure of her daughters as rent payments on occasion, once they came of age. Her step daughter has recently come of age, and the thought of enjoying her as well seemed to be lodged in his wicked brain.



(time to try the bad guy role, haven't done so in awhile!)

Looks good. We just need our Fairy Godfather's bio and we have everyone. I'll post an IC thread here in a bit. I'll be doing that while cooking pizza, chatting, posting, and all that multi-tasking I'm known for.

Fairy Godfather.

127 years old.

He can make himself look like anything. Sometimes a friendly old man, sometimes a dark handsome soldier. He is a trainee when it comes to granting wishes and requests, he has yet to earn the gold status of Fairy Godfather.

At best, he's a Fairy Godcousin, or so...

He's a nice guy, who tries to help. Sometimes he ends up blundering, nobody is perfect. He does enjoy making someone's dreams come true, though.

w00t! - - I could use a Fairy Godfather right about now. I'm about to put the IC up. Be back with a link in a few.

Here is the IC thread.
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=23291688#post23291688

Um Red I thought I would let you know I read the first post and it was great only you spelt my name wrong oops it is Amara not Arama. sorry I just did not want people to get confused.

prissy_kytten said:

Um Red I thought I would let you know I read the first post and it was great only you spelt my name wrong oops it is Amara not Arama. sorry I just did not want people to get confused.

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Oops... I'll go fix that. Thanks and sorry.

All fixed. I'll remember now... my sis is named Tamara, so we'll just take the T off. She was an evil sister but not a step, so it'll be easy to remember.

hehe, well now that should make things easier, i am going to post in a few moments although my character well not interact with any one til Cinderella has faced you.

Hey there. I would be interested in playing the other evil step sister if you will have me. Check out my threads to see what kind of writer I am and let me know if I am up to par with you guys