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Received the following Anonymous feedback today:

<the two cats story is great. i would love to see more stories on cat
osterman.>

Thanks, fan. Glad you liked it. That's two people who have asked for a sequel so far. We'll see if one happens. :cool:
 
"Damnit why didn't you make it longer. It ended too quickly"

My response: A story is as long as a story is. What's your problem? Didn't have enough time to finish jacking your silly little weiner??
 
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Originally Posted by neonlyte
Hope that doesn't mean we're going to drown in Anonymous comments - some of us can barely swim.


FallingToFly said:
Hey, if they're GOOD anonymous comments- I'll build a raft. This is the most recent one.
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I certainly don't object to anonymous comments or emails when they are compliments. :) I especially like to hear from women telling me they liked whatever they read. Even if they give e a negative vote and explain it, I don't mind it too much. ;) What really bugs me is the troll who throws a one-bomb and never says why. I tend to have EXTREMELY negative opnions of such persons. :mad:
 
Dear Anon,

It's NOT that I can't come up with my own characters. If you read any of my work, you'd realize that. It's that I wanted to mix my firsts by having both my first actual Celeb story and my first Contest entry at the same time. THAT was the point. Sorry if I made you yawn. Judging by votes, however, quite a few disagree.
 
Anon,

Thank you. I've been privileged in my life to meet the oldest living person. I've now added the world's most depraved person.

If you want to read a story about that, you'll have to write it yourself. Eww...

Nonny
 
I got this today

"I really liked your Cyber Cheat story. I guess I liked it cos it was real and it could actually happen. Secretly tho, I had hoped when you got the message online, it would be Mark trying to win you back thru chat. Oh, don't forget to use the spellchecker next time."

I have to thank this contributor for a decent, honest review instead of "Bitch. The fucking story wasn't long enough. I wasn't done jacking off by the end." :rolleyes:

I especially liked your comment "I guess I liked it cos it was real and could actually happen." That is so appreciated. That's exactly what I've tried to do - make it real and strike some nerve with the reader so he can relate (empathize, maybe) with the story.

As far as Jenny (Not me, by the way) meeting Mark on line, that was a directon I explored and rejected because I was so hooked on the line, "So here I sit with a 10 inch dildo up my pussy talking to some jack off in New Jersey who probubly works for 7-11". That sentence was such a great catch and truly showed Jenny's (and my personal) attitued about cybering online. Had it been Mark she met, I would have lost that and it would have ended up being an completely different story.

And you are correct. I should have run the story through spell check one last time.

Thanks again, my friend, whoever you are :kiss:

Jenny
 
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Sigh

I just received that regarding my "How to piss off and editor" essay: "[....] thank you for inspiring me to become an editor, I shall endeavor to go forth and shock and cajole in your name."

And I can't even thank that person so I'll do it here in the hope he/she read that thread.

Thank you very much Mr/Mrs Anonymous. I'm happy to know you understood my irreverence and weren't put off by it; some people didn't understand it.

I'll be happy to welcome you in the EF if and when you choose to make your presence known to me. First beer's on me. :D
 
A Special Thanks to Anonymous

Hi Anon,

Yesterday, I received a very kind e-mail from an anonymous person who had read my "Anita Erotic Island Adventure." This e mail was chock full of very good advice, How wonderful to receive advice from you. I want to thank you for your kindness and taking the time to critique my story. Not many readers would have done that.

My subsequent stories I feel were better. Should you be inclined, and/or curious give my story, "A Young Boy Remembers," a quick read. Hopefully you might find it to be better written. While I'm still a 'work in progress,' there is a lot of joy in trying. *smiles*

Here is a link to that story. Don't bother trying to vote or anything. This is just to hopefully make you feel better about the wonderful advice you gave me.

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=240100

Again, Anon, I sincerely thank you. Next time, please feel comfortable to leave your e mail so I can thank you in a more personal manner.

duddle
 
This in my Feed back a few mins ago

Obviously, this comment related to "Bad Day" posted this morning along with a 1 vote. My response:

My Dear Anon or Anus (I'm not really sure)

I respect your opinon some what more than you respect the story. I agree with you that those who rape are a low form of life and should be punished. However, the story was about the woman, not the rapists. I suggest you go back and finish third grade before submitting any more of your drivil.

It would be interesting to know how you came about you total misinturpritation of the story. Did it have something to do with your stint in a prison cell with "Bubba"?

I truely appreciate your comments.

Respectfully,

Jenny :kiss:
 
Where the hell do they come from?

LMAO... I just got this one.

"Comments:

nice pic too bad you live so far away it's been a long time since i
have been with a woman and never with one older than me. by the way i
liked your story. never had a black dick so i'm not sure about that whole
thing with them being bigger than white men but hey, i've heard it
enough to believe it.

*DO NOT hit the REPLY button to respond to this email.*"

Dear Anon,

I'm terribly sorry if I live so far from you. Please let me know where you do live so I can move even farther.

I do have a question. You say you saw my picture. Does this assume that I am either black or perfer "black dick"? Neither assumption is correct. I am sorry to see, however, you've never tried a "black dick". I really think you should.

Thank you for your comments.

Jenny :kiss:

PS

The SHIFT KEY makes big letters out of little ones. Please learn to use it.
 
Jenny_Jackson said:
LMAO... I just got this one.

"Comments:

nice pic too bad you live so far away it's been a long time since i
have been with a woman and never with one older than me. by the way i
liked your story. never had a black dick so i'm not sure about that whole
thing with them being bigger than white men but hey, i've heard it
enough to believe it.

*DO NOT hit the REPLY button to respond to this email.*"

Dear Anon,

I'm terribly sorry if I live so far from you. Please let me know where you do live so I can move even farther.

I do have a question. You say you saw my picture. Does this assume that I am either black or perfer "black dick"? Neither assumption is correct. I am sorry to see, however, you've never tried a "black dick". I really think you should.

Thank you for your comments.

Jenny :kiss:

PS

The SHIFT KEY makes big letters out of little ones. Please learn to use it.
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When did it become fashionable to be so scornful of someone who enjoyed something you've written?

:rolleyes:
 
Jenny_Jackson said:
Obviously, this comment related to "Bad Day" posted this morning along with a 1 vote. My response:

My Dear Anon or Anus (I'm not really sure)

I respect your opinon some what more than you respect the story. I agree with you that those who rape are a low form of life and should be punished. However, the story was about the woman, not the rapists. I suggest you go back and finish third grade before submitting any more of your drivil.

It would be interesting to know how you came about you total misinturpritation of the story. Did it have something to do with your stint in a prison cell with "Bubba"?

I truely appreciate your comments.

Respectfully,

Jenny :kiss:
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drivel* sweetheart.
Also, misinterpretation* somewhat* truly*
 
cloudy said:
When did it become fashionable to be so scornful of someone who enjoyed something you've written?

:rolleyes:
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Sorry, Cloudy...
But the bozo never read the story. If he had he'd have known the only person in the story who was Afro-American was the woman.

I'm probably a little think skinned because of the 400 hate mails I got today.
 
Jenny_Jackson said:
Sorry, Cloudy...
But the bozo never read the story. If he had he'd have known the only person in the story who was Afro-American was the woman.

I'm probably a little think skinned because of the 400 hate mails I got today.
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Honestly? It sounds like the comment was written by a woman, and you have no idea whether they read it or not, hard to tell from the short comment.

Sorry, I still think it's rather ungrateful to be so scornful of someone who took the time to write, and let you know they enjoyed what you'd written.
 
cloudy said:
Honestly? It sounds like the comment was written by a woman, and you have no idea whether they read it or not, hard to tell from the short comment.

Sorry, I still think it's rather ungrateful to be so scornful of someone who took the time to write, and let you know they enjoyed what you'd written.
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After thinking it over, Cloudy, You could very well be right. I have humiliated myself by over reacting to a long series of nasty and mean spirited comments from a range of readers. This person, may have been a woman and he/she did like the story. For that I owe her a sincere appology.

Thank you for pointing this out. :kiss:
 
DEAR Anonymous,

To answer your "questioin", no the name of the car "ain't" made up.
Furthermore, I am sorry that my not sending you my phone number has caused you to email to me again, outlining just how 'pissed off' my failure to do so has made you, and how much of a "Bioch" you now think I am. May I suggest that you re-read the story, using the second half of it to aid you in f$$#ing yourself--- that should give you some satisfaction at least.
 
I know I'm jumping in late. LOL

re: Bewitched, 03/13/06 By: Anonymous in usa
that is the weardest story i think i have ever read but it was a very good story if there is more to it please do tel me so
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Dear Anonymous,

Glad to know you appreciate a weird story. You do realize it's a story in the non-human section? Nothing to it, apart from picturing a gay centaur which I thought was fun.

:D
 
To my anonymous troll-

Congrats! You only let it stay up there for about six hours! BRAVO! Way to stay on the ball!

:D

*too thrilled with musical morphine to give a damn*
 
I've gotten two lovely anonymous feedbacks lately on the newest submission, so I'm all thrilled.

:p

But I'm waiting for the other show to fall when I start throwing the new stuff I've been working on up.
 
Aurora Black said:
This was a comment (not Anonymous, but anyway) for my new poem, Bullet:



Fuck you.
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I saw that, 'Rora...
what an ass! :mad:

:kiss: it was a powerful poem.
 
Jenny_Jackson said:
"Damnit why didn't you make it longer. It ended too quickly"

My response: A story is as long as a story is. What's your problem? Didn't have enough time to finish jacking your silly little weiner??
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Funny the wife said that just last night :devil:
 
Dear annonymous thank you for your positive comment... I'm sorry you found the story too British and ruined by English, English spelling and grammar.... But I am fucking English you septic twat !!!! The story was set in Britain, what do you expect !!!

And no I won't learn to write more... 'Mid-Atlantic'... even if I am a freekin pirate.

True folks, I got one who told me to write for the US market because the English accent ruined it for him/her/whatever.
 
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