ex wife and (step?) daughter at the stripclub

Nightscream89

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Don't think I have time to write this myself but I though maybe someone likes to write or fantasize about this:
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Mark is a recently divorced man working for a small firm.
His 19 yo daughter (or step-daughter if you dislike incest.) decided to live with her mom and he hasn't seen either of them in 2 months now.
He is a bit down in the dumps so his boss decides to cheer him up by taking him and all of co-workers to his favorite stripclub.

The boss is excited and explains that tonight is a special night where women have put themselves up for auction to spend the night with whoever purchases them. The boss plans on spending some money to get one or a couple of women for the entire group to enjoy for the night.

Mark isn't completely convinced but does think it would be a nice distraction. At least untill a mother/daughter pair step on stage.
To his horror Mark sees his ex-wife and (step?) daughter standing there, before he can fully understand the situation his boss says:
"A mother/Daughter pair? Now that's what I'm talking about! 2,000 dollars!"
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What do you guys think? Maybe a bit generic?
 
I know this is fantasy, but I find the idea far fetched. Even if you were in a location where prostitution is legal, I just can't imagine a woman who would let herself be bought by a stranger of the street. Maybe in a more controlled environment where the women know most of the men. Kind of 'Eyes Wide Shut".
 
I know this is fantasy, but I find the idea far fetched. Even if you were in a location where prostitution is legal, I just can't imagine a woman who would let herself be bought by a stranger of the street. Maybe in a more controlled environment where the women know most of the men. Kind of 'Eyes Wide Shut".

Is it? Where I live prostitution is legal and I could probably get a girl here, who I never met before, to have sex with in like an hour. Just by going online and calling an escort agency.
So I didn't think this would be much different from that?
 
Yes, but strippers are strippers and escorts are escorts. Strippers work in an environment where the move of every paton is watched by large ex-cons with anger management issues. Escorts have the ability to vet their clientele or have an agency do it for them. It's terrific that you have that that freedom but the girl still gets to say no if she doesn't like the look of you.

In your scenario, the element of choice is removed and only a very stupid person would put themselves in that situation.
 
Yes, but strippers are strippers and escorts are escorts. Strippers work in an environment where the move of every paton is watched by large ex-cons with anger management issues. Escorts have the ability to vet their clientele or have an agency do it for them. It's terrific that you have that that freedom but the girl still gets to say no if she doesn't like the look of you.

In your scenario, the element of choice is removed and only a very stupid person would put themselves in that situation.
That is a good point,
Do you think this is fixable by for example in stead 'spending the night' they bid for 2 hours in a champagne room? Maybe mentioning beforehand that the stripclub is high-end with a dresscode?

Or do you think this just wouldn't work at all?
 
That is a good point,
Do you think this is fixable by for example in stead 'spending the night' they bid for 2 hours in a champagne room? Maybe mentioning beforehand that the stripclub is high-end with a dresscode?

Or do you think this just wouldn't work at all?
Well auction stories have been done and done well but usually in some sort of controlled environment, like a holiday party for the law firm that one of them works for. Proceeds go to a charity. And they auction doesn't involve sex, maybe just some light chores, but it becomes sexual by choice. That your idea happens in a strip club states emphatically that the women will be used sexually is what makes it a little hard to swallow (pun intended).

I'll think on this a little more today, and get back with you if I think of anything.
 
I can definitely see $2 grand as a night-long ‘hostess fee’ in a vip room at a strip club for a pair. Unless this is a major vice area - *cough*Vegas*cough* or the like - the majority of vip rooms I’m aware of are small, often not much bigger than a chair or couch. The boss spending for ‘the whole group’ would require shifts due to constrained space, not to mention how many each stripper/dancer/escort could handle at once.

Maybe set up foreshadowing, the boss takes a crew and sees the ex & daughter and is enraptured, getting them at the table for most of the night to the husband’s horror. Boss, clueless putz that he is (maybe he’s 3rd gen owner?) sees the reaction & misreads it as interest/fascination/lust - painting his own reaction on the hubby.

They get thru the night, there are discussions off away from boss/work/etc, & things stabilize to some level. Then hubby’s birthday comes up, or he hits one outta the park for the boss, saves his bacon, or otherwise deserves a special treat. The boss intends to reward hubby with a glory hole - with ex & daughter inside, to all their upset once the boss lets the cat outta the bag eventually
 
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