BrightShinyGirl
Abusive Little Bitch
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World-building can be personally entertaining but a story needs a hook. There's nothing in what you posted above to drive the narrative forward. "What if America … but super-racist!" is boring. What's your inciting incident? Who is your protagonist? What or who are they struggling against? What sort of climax are you driving toward? What kind of catharsis? What the hammer? What the chain?That is not what the story idea entails. The story is about an alternate timeline where some white men like black women and openly show it in public before the civil rights era even began(not just privately) and instead of black men campaigning to marry white women they see black women as more desirable and powerful so interracial relationships between black men and white women are basically nonexistent and that leaves white women with no choice but to deal with the reality that the only men who care about them are increasingly being pursued by other women and the ensuing paranoia that those men are completely giving into their advances even when interracial relationships are relatively small in number.
It is more psychological than actually being about sex, aka actual erotica and not just a porn script.
This society worships whatever crap black people come up with. This society is so deferential to black people that black people today are actually doing worse than their grandparents in school despite not being limited in educational opportunities in any way and having it way easier than white kids.
Cuckold stories today are written today by white men who think they don’t deserve women and get off on being humiliated by racists and white women who have been brainwashed to hate their own lineage, their opinion of themselves are far more sick than the stories they write.
It stopped being about the power dynamic before cuckold stories ever got published.
It’s not about flipping a power dynamic, it’s about changing historical events according to the direction this country was moving in the past.
Black men and women might be more powerful without being tied down by feminists and having better relationships with white men but white men would be largely the same and white women would obviously benefit from the white man’s power.
Even though you say it's not about sex, wallowing in world-building is masturbatory. Move on!